for Now's Too Late6/28/2004 c1 
50your guilty pleasure
I really like this poem- the repetitiveness of certain lines gives it flow- it's really good. I like the irony used in the last line. I really like it.
-ally-
50your guilty pleasureI really like this poem- the repetitiveness of certain lines gives it flow- it's really good. I like the irony used in the last line. I really like it.
-ally-
4/11/2004 c1 48Silent Laughter
Ha! the last line was perfect. I liked the emotion here~ there was a lot! who were you writing this 'to'? it was really powerful, in a backwards type of way. ^^
~*~SL~*~
48Silent LaughterHa! the last line was perfect. I liked the emotion here~ there was a lot! who were you writing this 'to'? it was really powerful, in a backwards type of way. ^^
~*~SL~*~
4/3/2004 c1 89lalamushu
i'm sure this is how a lot of people feel. i feel the same way too. it's like "WHY AREN'T YOU LISTENING TO ME?" ugh. it's disgusting! great poem. and thanks for reviewing my piece. ^_^
89lalamushui'm sure this is how a lot of people feel. i feel the same way too. it's like "WHY AREN'T YOU LISTENING TO ME?" ugh. it's disgusting! great poem. and thanks for reviewing my piece. ^_^
4/1/2004 c1 132mizu no kokoro
Simply awesome, i feel the same way at times. it's like what u say blows past and it doesn't matter AT all T.T great poem, i can definitely relate^^ keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroSimply awesome, i feel the same way at times. it's like what u say blows past and it doesn't matter AT all T.T great poem, i can definitely relate^^ keep writing!
3/31/2004 c1 36nowhere2turn
you're a great writer. this is incredible because i can relate so well. it really hit home, on a level. thank you for reviewing my poems and for the advice. it is much appreciated. again, i loved it! :)
36nowhere2turnyou're a great writer. this is incredible because i can relate so well. it really hit home, on a level. thank you for reviewing my poems and for the advice. it is much appreciated. again, i loved it! :)
3/26/2004 c1 74LordK
I can relate! So true. Anyway, that was wonderful, you know. Very, very good. I liked. Great stuff. The adjectives fit in so well... you're poetry is simply astounding.
74LordKI can relate! So true. Anyway, that was wonderful, you know. Very, very good. I liked. Great stuff. The adjectives fit in so well... you're poetry is simply astounding.
3/26/2004 c1 58floorcollision
i really feel there's a lot hiding in this poem- it feels there's more than just the surface of words- i'm really impressed with the depth and carefully planned stanzas.
-fc
58floorcollisioni really feel there's a lot hiding in this poem- it feels there's more than just the surface of words- i'm really impressed with the depth and carefully planned stanzas.
-fc
3/25/2004 c1 6choirchick123
Wow... too weird, I just broke up with my boyfriend like, today, the same one I wrote one of my poems about. and i feel almost the same. I should have a poem out in a little while kinda the same, but not on purpose, i was already writing it. good job!
6choirchick123Wow... too weird, I just broke up with my boyfriend like, today, the same one I wrote one of my poems about. and i feel almost the same. I should have a poem out in a little while kinda the same, but not on purpose, i was already writing it. good job!
3/25/2004 c1 15Amaya Windsong
this is really good. very good. i like the one word lines. gives a clear sense of what you're talking about. hm. good job!
|Rikku|
15Amaya Windsongthis is really good. very good. i like the one word lines. gives a clear sense of what you're talking about. hm. good job!
|Rikku|
3/25/2004 c1 106Cherry Jones
I know exactly how you feel
just remember to stay strong
and you can do better
Keep it up
Sweetipi
106Cherry JonesI know exactly how you feel
just remember to stay strong
and you can do better
Keep it up
Sweetipi