
4/13/2004 c1
36obsidian katana
sad and depressing, but i like this. well written, full of emotion. nice rhyming too, wonderful work on this piece. keep up the awesome writing!

sad and depressing, but i like this. well written, full of emotion. nice rhyming too, wonderful work on this piece. keep up the awesome writing!
4/4/2004 c1
30Fuu Hououji1
It reminds me of that poem you wrote. The one that went with the picture of Omi, from Weiss. Remember? You're so good at creating rhyming stanzas. I can't make anything rhyme. Mine is free verse. I have to struggle to get rhythym. I ENVY YOU!

It reminds me of that poem you wrote. The one that went with the picture of Omi, from Weiss. Remember? You're so good at creating rhyming stanzas. I can't make anything rhyme. Mine is free verse. I have to struggle to get rhythym. I ENVY YOU!
3/26/2004 c1
22PheonixSlayer
hee hee we're in a morbid mood today LG. Alas, beware of the sea. Anyways, great poebut you broke your rhyme scheme a few times

hee hee we're in a morbid mood today LG. Alas, beware of the sea. Anyways, great poebut you broke your rhyme scheme a few times