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4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
wow...i think the dove part means whatever you wnant it to mean...not just it normal symbolism, but anything positive that you need...very good
6/17/2004 c1 6TheForgottenArtz
aww! how sweet! i love fluffy stories/ poems! but i usually write stories because i suck at poetry. if you have time, check out my story, the enchantress :) Thanks
4/21/2004 c1 29amazingblazes
This was really good! I love your poems, you're able to fit so much emotion into such a small thing. And that's a big thing.
4/21/2004 c1 8Charna
This is good...I'm not into the whole 'longing' business but...anyway...it was good.
4/8/2004 c1 8A-wolf-called-Skya
Hi! great poem, speechless! keep it up!
Thanks for reviewing! XD yes, you know me and blacksun!lol. anyway, as he said, he will NOT take over the story. i'm working on fourth chapter, it should be done tommarro, or posted later tonight! wait till you meet Tyrael!
-Rachel
*Every legend leaves a mark*
come on MSN! i'm on, ya no!
3/31/2004 c1 xzerinieah
I really like this poem.
Maybe you could review some of my works, too?
3/27/2004 c1 9Enchantress33
Nice poem.

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