for All Play and No Work12/18/2010 c6 
1quacko
great. i love your story so far. haha Blair's evil, getting eddie to do the dirty work. i can feel this story getting better :D
1quackogreat. i love your story so far. haha Blair's evil, getting eddie to do the dirty work. i can feel this story getting better :D
11/24/2010 c13 jamandblueberry
So far I have read till the chapter and the story is still stuck at the same paste which i would actually say its quite a slow paste...but plot is well revised..cant wait till trouble comes
So far I have read till the chapter and the story is still stuck at the same paste which i would actually say its quite a slow paste...but plot is well revised..cant wait till trouble comes
11/21/2010 c25 2Farah B
I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, this story! It's very well written, with a few exceptions of spelling mistakes, but otherwise I loved it! ( I think you've gotten the point :P) but the one thing I want to know is what happened with Leah and her dad situation? Is she living with her grandma now? Because it wasn't exactly clear. Also what happened with Leslie? How exactly was she involved with pippa's beatings? And was she and pippa's issue resolved or are they still enemies? Because Matt seemed close with her in the beginning of the story and then you never mentioned her again.. But other than those two things, that was absolutely one hell of a story. Especially Tom with all his fruit...
Just one more question... Does she ever say I love you back?
2Farah BI LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE, this story! It's very well written, with a few exceptions of spelling mistakes, but otherwise I loved it! ( I think you've gotten the point :P) but the one thing I want to know is what happened with Leah and her dad situation? Is she living with her grandma now? Because it wasn't exactly clear. Also what happened with Leslie? How exactly was she involved with pippa's beatings? And was she and pippa's issue resolved or are they still enemies? Because Matt seemed close with her in the beginning of the story and then you never mentioned her again.. But other than those two things, that was absolutely one hell of a story. Especially Tom with all his fruit...
Just one more question... Does she ever say I love you back?
11/9/2010 c25 The Imagination Addict
WOW. This has been the most AMAZING story. At first I didn’t quite like Blair cos she seemed like a bitch, but then you started hinting at deeper issues and eventually all her troubles came out. And it’s so nice that all the people in the story have different yet real problems. And despite neglecting to write more about what happened to Pippa’s sis, Pip managed to reach closure. So, LOVED THIS.
WOW. This has been the most AMAZING story. At first I didn’t quite like Blair cos she seemed like a bitch, but then you started hinting at deeper issues and eventually all her troubles came out. And it’s so nice that all the people in the story have different yet real problems. And despite neglecting to write more about what happened to Pippa’s sis, Pip managed to reach closure. So, LOVED THIS.
10/4/2010 c25 Dwindling Fire
WEO! I loved this! :D
It took me 15mins to get the review button working, but that's cool. Awesome stuff mate (Y)
WEO! I loved this! :D
It took me 15mins to get the review button working, but that's cool. Awesome stuff mate (Y)
9/28/2010 c25 sarcasm is my middle name
Hey, it's a great story... i love it! Congrats, epilogue maybe?
Hey, it's a great story... i love it! Congrats, epilogue maybe?
9/14/2010 c25 3LanternLight13
Great story. The characters were great and developed throughout the story and the plot was great too, keeping me engrossed. Thankyou for sharing.
3LanternLight13Great story. The characters were great and developed throughout the story and the plot was great too, keeping me engrossed. Thankyou for sharing.
8/3/2010 c25 LocalYokel
i loved it. LOVED IT. no joke.
you are now on my favourites :D
keep up the fantastic writing!
i loved it. LOVED IT. no joke.
you are now on my favourites :D
keep up the fantastic writing!
8/2/2010 c1 LocalYokel
yay! england! ah it's so good to read a story i can relate to without trying to figure out all the americanisms. :D
you write really well and i can't believe i only just caught sight of this story. i can't wait to read the rest! :D
ps - ugh. crammer courses were the ultimate bane of my life.
yay! england! ah it's so good to read a story i can relate to without trying to figure out all the americanisms. :D
you write really well and i can't believe i only just caught sight of this story. i can't wait to read the rest! :D
ps - ugh. crammer courses were the ultimate bane of my life.
8/1/2010 c25 11BlackWolfCub
Wow, so cool to read a story on here that is set in an English school with all the lovely GCSE and AS level exams that I actually understand! Also with teenagers who don't all drive. Love the story, there were some chapters that seemed to be lacking something but overall I really enjoyed this. Leah is horrible and Matt so sweet. Tom needs somebody too and it was awful when they lost the baby. Loved the comment from Granny about the gardener it is so something my Granny might say! Totally embarrasing but kind of funny about trying to understand something they totally don't comprehend.
Anyway thank you for letting me while a way a few hours reading something good. Hope your exams turned out well!
11BlackWolfCubWow, so cool to read a story on here that is set in an English school with all the lovely GCSE and AS level exams that I actually understand! Also with teenagers who don't all drive. Love the story, there were some chapters that seemed to be lacking something but overall I really enjoyed this. Leah is horrible and Matt so sweet. Tom needs somebody too and it was awful when they lost the baby. Loved the comment from Granny about the gardener it is so something my Granny might say! Totally embarrasing but kind of funny about trying to understand something they totally don't comprehend.
Anyway thank you for letting me while a way a few hours reading something good. Hope your exams turned out well!
7/24/2010 c25 SandraStarck
This story was great! You did well on Blair/Pippa's character development.
However, I missed what happened to Leslie. Did she also get some sort of comeuppance. She must have helped Leah torture Blair. What does Matt think of his cousin and Alice of her now?
This story was great! You did well on Blair/Pippa's character development.
However, I missed what happened to Leslie. Did she also get some sort of comeuppance. She must have helped Leah torture Blair. What does Matt think of his cousin and Alice of her now?
6/29/2010 c25 6Madison Clarke
i enjoyed it alot. was completely different to what i was expecting...can i also say i am so glad i starting reading i t once it was finished...dont think i would have been able to wait for the updates...
6Madison Clarkei enjoyed it alot. was completely different to what i was expecting...can i also say i am so glad i starting reading i t once it was finished...dont think i would have been able to wait for the updates...
6/29/2010 c15 8castiel89
I found your story via A Drop of Romeo... And now I'm hooked :)
I broke my wrist a couple years ago, not fun. I also ended up having surgery to repair it. I was stuck with 3 pins in my wrist, 2 nights in the hospital, 2 surgeries (1 to insert the pins, 1 to take them out because the skin grew over the pins and embedded them... Thank GOD I was put out..), and a cast from the base of my fingers to my armpit... So I can relate (somewhat) to Blair's pain/annoyance with her broken bone...
Now I must go read more!
8castiel89I found your story via A Drop of Romeo... And now I'm hooked :)
I broke my wrist a couple years ago, not fun. I also ended up having surgery to repair it. I was stuck with 3 pins in my wrist, 2 nights in the hospital, 2 surgeries (1 to insert the pins, 1 to take them out because the skin grew over the pins and embedded them... Thank GOD I was put out..), and a cast from the base of my fingers to my armpit... So I can relate (somewhat) to Blair's pain/annoyance with her broken bone...
Now I must go read more!