for Her Eyes They Were Black4/19/2006 c1 
30Flame-sama
Man, and I thought that my dreams were creepy! Of all the bizare and creepy dreams that I have had or that my friends have had and told me about, this one definately tops the list! I think that I would be afraid to sleep for a week or more after a dream like that! But the way you wrote it, though it wasn't very long, made me see it from both your Point of View, and as if I was watching it from another view point. Very good writing!
30Flame-samaMan, and I thought that my dreams were creepy! Of all the bizare and creepy dreams that I have had or that my friends have had and told me about, this one definately tops the list! I think that I would be afraid to sleep for a week or more after a dream like that! But the way you wrote it, though it wasn't very long, made me see it from both your Point of View, and as if I was watching it from another view point. Very good writing!
4/18/2006 c1 I Found Myself At 24
Wow, now that was freaky. Amazingly written and truly creepy. Good work!
Wow, now that was freaky. Amazingly written and truly creepy. Good work!
10/2/2004 c1 Seleana
*Is to scared to sleep* Damnit why did I have to read that? Now I'm gonna be scared to go to church too! Wah!
*Is to scared to sleep* Damnit why did I have to read that? Now I'm gonna be scared to go to church too! Wah!
10/2/2004 c1 Laura Barton
Whoa, you really had a dream like that? Call me crazy if you wish, but I love dreams like that. Mostly because they scare me, but they often have a messege too. Anyway, I liked it a lot and great description. Though there wasn't much of it, it was enough to make the story form and play out in my head. Good work. And it's kinda creepy in a cool sense that your father also had a dream that night following along the same lines as your own.
Whoa, you really had a dream like that? Call me crazy if you wish, but I love dreams like that. Mostly because they scare me, but they often have a messege too. Anyway, I liked it a lot and great description. Though there wasn't much of it, it was enough to make the story form and play out in my head. Good work. And it's kinda creepy in a cool sense that your father also had a dream that night following along the same lines as your own.
4/25/2004 c1 30Lioness Black
The dream was creepy, no doubt, but I think it would have been better written if you had protrayed it in a story form, rather than just telling us the contents of the dream.
30Lioness BlackThe dream was creepy, no doubt, but I think it would have been better written if you had protrayed it in a story form, rather than just telling us the contents of the dream.
4/22/2004 c1 10FireChainsaw
Whoa. Freaking weird. Personally, I haven't had a nightmare in about nine years, though some of my dreams have been pretty bizare. Never really thought to make a story of them, but...
Anyay, good, story, bad dream.
Thanks for R+Ring A Word on Monkeys. I do in fact have the claymore, Christmas present from my Grandfather, Indian Chief and artist, and really really cool f-king Grandparent.
10FireChainsawWhoa. Freaking weird. Personally, I haven't had a nightmare in about nine years, though some of my dreams have been pretty bizare. Never really thought to make a story of them, but...
Anyay, good, story, bad dream.
Thanks for R+Ring A Word on Monkeys. I do in fact have the claymore, Christmas present from my Grandfather, Indian Chief and artist, and really really cool f-king Grandparent.