for BonaFide Realist3/28/2004 c1 
31Cindy Moon
You can't say that this poem is bad, it's still a work in progress. Topic is awesome though. It's a realistic type approach. Keep at it, you'll find the ending you want for it.
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy MoonYou can't say that this poem is bad, it's still a work in progress. Topic is awesome though. It's a realistic type approach. Keep at it, you'll find the ending you want for it.
-Cindy Moon *)
3/28/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Lots of dialogue, makes it a bit more realistic and very well written. Thank you ever so much for your review. And, I'm not a better poet than anyone, heh. =) but thank you.
Jenna xx
119AntiPleasureLots of dialogue, makes it a bit more realistic and very well written. Thank you ever so much for your review. And, I'm not a better poet than anyone, heh. =) but thank you.
Jenna xx