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3/29/2004 c1 44Patrick O'Leary
you need to work on grammar and spelling, you made alot of careless mistakes especially with your and you're and their, there, and they're. also some of your sentences are a bit akward, otherwise its a good story. i liked the confliction between the old vampire and kelsey

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