5/23/2004 c1 57teh tarik
Great wording! *breaths intertwined*

4/15/2004 c1 28frugale
True, G isn't the right rating for this, but I don't think it'll cause trauma to any child. I like this graphic one, but the first line is a bit weak when compared to the rest of the haiku. Great nonetheless!

3/29/2004 c1 3penumbral
Short, but raw and passionate feeling; don't know if it should be rated G though lol.