
3/30/2004 c1
3tigers-i
oh, this one is nice. Its really good, but should have been longer, but its fine the way it is right now.(that wasnt supposed to be mean)

oh, this one is nice. Its really good, but should have been longer, but its fine the way it is right now.(that wasnt supposed to be mean)
3/30/2004 c1
96AutumnRhapsody
I really like it, the word choice and the line breakup and hence the rhythm, (that kind of stems from the other two? yes) and I really like the ending, again, and the concept, it's just a really good poem.

I really like it, the word choice and the line breakup and hence the rhythm, (that kind of stems from the other two? yes) and I really like the ending, again, and the concept, it's just a really good poem.