for Unwanted Crone4/11/2004 c1 
4aragorn-lover2001
O my gosh! so true. Guys look for the perfect one. (I hate when people tell me this but honestly) they probably aren't worth it.
Your last line 'Things will work out', things have to work out or I'll die! Isn't that one of the things you have look to look forward to? Being loved?
enough of this now, bye!
4aragorn-lover2001O my gosh! so true. Guys look for the perfect one. (I hate when people tell me this but honestly) they probably aren't worth it.
Your last line 'Things will work out', things have to work out or I'll die! Isn't that one of the things you have look to look forward to? Being loved?
enough of this now, bye!
4/2/2004 c1 31Amethyst Haze
Very nice and direct to the point with well placed rhyming scheme and rhythm. Just to note, do you mean for it to be "croan," or "crone?"
The speaker's emotions are very honest and frank, not blinded by heavy sympathy or pity towards herself, though she has hope for beauty. I think it's a very lovely poem, keep it up.
31Amethyst HazeVery nice and direct to the point with well placed rhyming scheme and rhythm. Just to note, do you mean for it to be "croan," or "crone?"
The speaker's emotions are very honest and frank, not blinded by heavy sympathy or pity towards herself, though she has hope for beauty. I think it's a very lovely poem, keep it up.
3/31/2004 c1 40Aleonic Relic
i saw a small spelling problem but i think it was only one word. good poem, well described. i know how you feel except i'm a guy who's ignored by all the girls.
40Aleonic Relici saw a small spelling problem but i think it was only one word. good poem, well described. i know how you feel except i'm a guy who's ignored by all the girls.
3/31/2004 c1 Guest
I understand you situation, as I value a respect for you undying in a passionate sence-
As I once twas of your decore
drawing my emotions out and pening them a tence-
Dont give up I see all to well
That You fate lyes after your undying hell-
I congradulate you talent it fits your rep qite nice
But follow you emotions and dont be afraid to ask for advice-
Some of the best writers The greatest of all
Tell a true tale of amure and talent a fall-
See it is beleived in which I agree
That to write with pure emotion is the only way to truly suceed-
So follow dear to you heart and do not fear what you beleive for in your fortune I see what you wont beleive-
*Coming Soon*
April 1 2004
An unbeleivable display of un-matched talent will be released from my archives and all released that day.
Truly work unmatched, that put my other work to undiscribable shame.
Criticized as being I the realm of telent and expertice as Edgar Allen Poe and Robert Frost.This Expanental amount of work will all be released at the same time.
(I would be pleased if you would review my workings when they are released)
I understand you situation, as I value a respect for you undying in a passionate sence-
As I once twas of your decore
drawing my emotions out and pening them a tence-
Dont give up I see all to well
That You fate lyes after your undying hell-
I congradulate you talent it fits your rep qite nice
But follow you emotions and dont be afraid to ask for advice-
Some of the best writers The greatest of all
Tell a true tale of amure and talent a fall-
See it is beleived in which I agree
That to write with pure emotion is the only way to truly suceed-
So follow dear to you heart and do not fear what you beleive for in your fortune I see what you wont beleive-
*Coming Soon*
April 1 2004
An unbeleivable display of un-matched talent will be released from my archives and all released that day.
Truly work unmatched, that put my other work to undiscribable shame.
Criticized as being I the realm of telent and expertice as Edgar Allen Poe and Robert Frost.This Expanental amount of work will all be released at the same time.
(I would be pleased if you would review my workings when they are released)
3/31/2004 c1 13Jester V Zackwell
very touching. well written and has emotion. even though i don't like this type of poetry. i find myself loving this one. and if you will please review some of my poems.
13Jester V Zackwellvery touching. well written and has emotion. even though i don't like this type of poetry. i find myself loving this one. and if you will please review some of my poems.