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2/22/2005 c1 14method acting
i really enjoyed this poem...really shows the true boredom that is experianced in music class. Thank you for sharing...
4/18/2004 c1 HideAwayFairy
First off, thankyou for the constructive critisism. You are the first on to give me any and it is really appreciated. Secondly, I love this poem. It made me laugh and think about one of my teachers who just ramble on and on. Very nice.
4/18/2004 c1 37eew
~** First of all, thank you! Really! I haven't been able to gain constructive reviews like that for awhile. Honestly, I was really hesitating to post that here but I decided that I'm through with it. It's not really finished. And the swirling part? I was also unattracted to it. Thanks again!...
~ About this poem... umm I think that it talks about total lack of interesting things to do. Kind of what I felt when school ended. Yeah, I know. Good one!
c. butterfly~**
4/4/2004 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
I like this!

The repetition is good. :) Classes are boring...

Write more, damn you!

~Cassie

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