4/1/2004 c1 59Unfairy
almost a parallel structure, not quite, but good all the same

3/31/2004 c1 13Jester V Zackwell
I too am a Dreamer. I too wish I could leave this dreary existance...but that is my opinion. Great poem. I give it a 5 outta 5!

3/30/2004 c1 40Aleonic Relic
the poem has potential and there is some potential as a writer. the flow in this poem kind of just put me off for some reason. a little work and you'll be a great writer.