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12/8/2007 c1 34Ashlee Pond
Beautiful. Vindictive. True. Wonderfully written. Wonderful job.
8/1/2005 c1 34Aidlyn
It's been so long since I've looked through your profile. This poem is so amazing. I absolutely envy your writing skills.
5/22/2004 c1 75blue704
wow, that's way deep. the swearing, is very effective. great!
4/5/2004 c1 DragonsEclipse
Nicely written. I feel bad for the girl in this poem. Keep it up! ^_^
P.S. Hurry and update your stories! Please!
4/3/2004 c1 20darksiren1
beautiful poem. you should make it a song if you have enough time. awfully sad. but..also very much like real life..which i guess makes it more sad. if this is about you..im sorry i would say i know how you fell..but i probably dont.i hope you can turn a page on this.
congrats on the poem however.
3/31/2004 c1 15poser
That was really... well, sad. I can understand what you've said here and I know that there is another beyond this episode of life.

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