for Waking Up in Two Places6/30/2006 c1 
2RingoLaLa
Lol, did you have to do this poem for GCSE? Anyway, good work so far, keep it up.
2RingoLaLaLol, did you have to do this poem for GCSE? Anyway, good work so far, keep it up.
5/18/2005 c2 8Leah West
Boy, I can relate. Can I ever...I get up at 4:45 a.m. to go to a class. And I love those Saturdays where I can just lay and read a good book under my down comforter.
Lovely storiy. I love the contrast of the two chapters.
8Leah WestBoy, I can relate. Can I ever...I get up at 4:45 a.m. to go to a class. And I love those Saturdays where I can just lay and read a good book under my down comforter.
Lovely storiy. I love the contrast of the two chapters.
5/6/2005 c1 anghel
nice... but too short. i was wondering what happened next.
**cheers**
kimi anghel
nice... but too short. i was wondering what happened next.
**cheers**
kimi anghel
7/17/2004 c2 David Stephen
This is so beautiful and true. Amazing. I agree with what we have discussed about ourselves sharing Twinhood.
Your long lost twin...David x
This is so beautiful and true. Amazing. I agree with what we have discussed about ourselves sharing Twinhood.
Your long lost twin...David x
6/18/2004 c1 9Celeste Se'oir
Hmm... sounds familiar... like this morning when i serously didn't want to get up and go to school (even though It's the last day) and take my stupid exam.
Later,
~Ffuffy~
9Celeste Se'oirHmm... sounds familiar... like this morning when i serously didn't want to get up and go to school (even though It's the last day) and take my stupid exam.
Later,
~Ffuffy~
5/14/2004 c2 64chicanerysmile
God, how do you do this? You just seem to take life, and write it down, and make it... I don't know. I'm jealous. B.
64chicanerysmileGod, how do you do this? You just seem to take life, and write it down, and make it... I don't know. I'm jealous. B.
4/10/2004 c2 34marabelle
hello,
great description to this, i feel a connection to the main character, continue writing. i will read and review "memories" when i have time to sit down and enjoy it.
sarah.
34marabellehello,
great description to this, i feel a connection to the main character, continue writing. i will read and review "memories" when i have time to sit down and enjoy it.
sarah.
4/9/2004 c2 freedman121
I would say that was good, but I'm still super confused. Maybe if you made them into one chapter? I dunno...
Freedman
I would say that was good, but I'm still super confused. Maybe if you made them into one chapter? I dunno...
Freedman
4/3/2004 c2 34lil-popcorngurl
where's the rest of your story! :'( I wanna read more!
I don't really get what's going on aside from the whole waking up thng. i think you should change your summary because i don't think many people have heard of the poem it's based on. thx for reading my work
popcorn
34lil-popcorngurlwhere's the rest of your story! :'( I wanna read more!
I don't really get what's going on aside from the whole waking up thng. i think you should change your summary because i don't think many people have heard of the poem it's based on. thx for reading my work
popcorn