for Feelings11/18/2004 c1 Tricky Micky
Another great poem,
The only criticism I can provide is that the first stanza might sound better without the 'Though' on the last line.
Another great poem,
The only criticism I can provide is that the first stanza might sound better without the 'Though' on the last line.
3/31/2004 c1 
3The Pedestrian
Um, I didn't really like the poem. Sorry. But I have one thing, in the last stanza it should be "I like it when I'm happy" not "when I happy."
3The PedestrianUm, I didn't really like the poem. Sorry. But I have one thing, in the last stanza it should be "I like it when I'm happy" not "when I happy."
3/31/2004 c1 YingaYang
I really like the rhythm! It's so catchy!
~Ying
*P.S* If you have the time could you please review my work
I really like the rhythm! It's so catchy!
~Ying
*P.S* If you have the time could you please review my work