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11/18/2004 c1 Tricky Micky
Another great poem,

The only criticism I can provide is that the first stanza might sound better without the 'Though' on the last line.
5/8/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
This is so cute... it reminds me of my friend...
3/31/2004 c1 3The Pedestrian
Um, I didn't really like the poem. Sorry. But I have one thing, in the last stanza it should be "I like it when I'm happy" not "when I happy."
3/31/2004 c1 Toondra
I really like this one. Theres really strong emotion. great job!
3/31/2004 c1 YingaYang
I really like the rhythm! It's so catchy!
*P.S* If you have the time could you please review my work

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