for friends and lovers11/14/2004 c1 myno
well, i'm not a huge fan of rhyming... but it's really a very nicely written poem, the rythm is excellent.
well, i'm not a huge fan of rhyming... but it's really a very nicely written poem, the rythm is excellent.
3/31/2004 c1 
28Deluminated
Wow...I really like this. It's going on my favorites list. The rhyme scheme is simple, not overbearing like many are, and it doesn't ruin the concept to box it into an actual format...Great job.
28DeluminatedWow...I really like this. It's going on my favorites list. The rhyme scheme is simple, not overbearing like many are, and it doesn't ruin the concept to box it into an actual format...Great job.