
7/12/2004 c1
40singingspeechless
wow! again, another outstanding poem! i love the ryhtm and how it captivates every aspect of the mind. great job!

wow! again, another outstanding poem! i love the ryhtm and how it captivates every aspect of the mind. great job!
6/14/2004 c1 dreamingofflyingaway
Lauren! *glomps* goodness X_X you have totally blown me away with this poem...why did you not prod and poke me to read it? *wriggles eyebrows* you won an award hun! I _told_ you that you were amazing! *grinning like a silly fool* anyhow, must go, but we shall chat later I presume [over summer holiday yes yes?] ta ta for now hun, and don't stopd writing, you mesmerize me *_* *starry-eyed*
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
[Sabrina] *giggle* of course you knew that! *wink*
Lauren! *glomps* goodness X_X you have totally blown me away with this poem...why did you not prod and poke me to read it? *wriggles eyebrows* you won an award hun! I _told_ you that you were amazing! *grinning like a silly fool* anyhow, must go, but we shall chat later I presume [over summer holiday yes yes?] ta ta for now hun, and don't stopd writing, you mesmerize me *_* *starry-eyed*
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
[Sabrina] *giggle* of course you knew that! *wink*
5/30/2004 c1
57NeWriter
I wonder where did you get inspired to write this. Well, firstly, the topic can be written in a lot of ways and I think you chose the correct one. The descriptions were in the beginning but as you continued you let the reader get more into the person rather than the setting. Overall, I think you managed to let your feelings out pretty well! ;)

I wonder where did you get inspired to write this. Well, firstly, the topic can be written in a lot of ways and I think you chose the correct one. The descriptions were in the beginning but as you continued you let the reader get more into the person rather than the setting. Overall, I think you managed to let your feelings out pretty well! ;)
5/26/2004 c1
10laststarinthesky
hey laur its salma. nice with the rhyme it works perhaps i'll use it 2 :) i promised to review everything but it might take a while! send me an e-mail when you post another story/ poem!

hey laur its salma. nice with the rhyme it works perhaps i'll use it 2 :) i promised to review everything but it might take a while! send me an e-mail when you post another story/ poem!