for Shattered Glass4/8/2004 c1 
27Glennesque
Cool, i liked it though the last line seems 'flat' if you know what I mean and I hope it was intended, otherwise I'll look like a fool, because it really makes the peogression of the poem complete, going through all these thoughts and emotions and ending up with a vague question you started with. Good work!
27GlennesqueCool, i liked it though the last line seems 'flat' if you know what I mean and I hope it was intended, otherwise I'll look like a fool, because it really makes the peogression of the poem complete, going through all these thoughts and emotions and ending up with a vague question you started with. Good work!
4/1/2004 c1 6frozzen-fire
Hey..thanks for reviwing my stuff...wow...I'm very flattered someone found what I wrote worthy of praising. I read some of your poems, but this is the one I like most. I love the way you ended it.'But mostly shame/of being you/ What's normal anyways?' Gorgeous.
6frozzen-fireHey..thanks for reviwing my stuff...wow...I'm very flattered someone found what I wrote worthy of praising. I read some of your poems, but this is the one I like most. I love the way you ended it.'But mostly shame/of being you/ What's normal anyways?' Gorgeous.
4/1/2004 c1 43lronMaiden
interesting...it has a really 'angry' fast pace to it. i really like it too, i think i could relate.
ps. read some of my work if you get the time, or if you want to.
43lronMaideninteresting...it has a really 'angry' fast pace to it. i really like it too, i think i could relate.
ps. read some of my work if you get the time, or if you want to.