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6/7/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
I'm sorry, I laughed a little at the "Pot made of shit Filled up with piss" It just was forceful and I wasn't expecting it. So I was like whoa. Anyway, is this a new style for you? It's very compact, like a spring ready to let loose, it's that strong and powerful. Like you have pent up anger can't let it out and you have Turret's. Nicely done.
5/22/2004 c1 tinydog
i dont know what to say.
it is beautiful.
and so true.
4/1/2004 c1 31Shadow Gryphon
Ow... talk about bitter. Were you angry about something?
As for formatting, here's my tip. For line in the same stanze, hit Shift AND Enter. To star a new stanza, just hit enter. Then fictionpress puts it into blocks, or at least, fanfiction does. I'm guessing that since they're sister sites, it should work.
Gryph
4/1/2004 c1 94flyinfrogg
wow, rough life huh? i like your rhyming technique.

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