for Nothing Left6/5/2004 c1 
22Non-existent Puritanism
u're flow was odd in some places...but the idea was clear and a nice theme...not bad...
22Non-existent Puritanismu're flow was odd in some places...but the idea was clear and a nice theme...not bad...
4/1/2004 c1 40twisted little secret
Simple but poignant, the last two lines really stand out and sum up the poem beautifully.
-nix-
40twisted little secretSimple but poignant, the last two lines really stand out and sum up the poem beautifully.
-nix-
4/1/2004 c1 22Blissfully Unaware
Reminds me so much of the Elves in the Lord of the Rings book. However, it does have a sort of hand-to-mouth feeling, but the rhythmn is pretty good.
22Blissfully UnawareReminds me so much of the Elves in the Lord of the Rings book. However, it does have a sort of hand-to-mouth feeling, but the rhythmn is pretty good.