for Part of You7/9/2005 c1 
77by His blood
i loved this. beautifully simplistic, with eloquent language. sometimes your individual words - 'myopic, intangible, permanence' - conveyed as strong a message as an entire stanza. powerful and excellently written. i especially loved the way you divided sentences into separate stanzas, this was a nice touch. i also enjoyed the way that you used mostly lowercase letters, which added to the effect, and used '&' (i forget the name of it ^-^) instead of 'and.' very good job. you have a talent, please keep writing. i want to hear more from you. oh, just so you know, i added this to my favorites.-alison
77by His bloodi loved this. beautifully simplistic, with eloquent language. sometimes your individual words - 'myopic, intangible, permanence' - conveyed as strong a message as an entire stanza. powerful and excellently written. i especially loved the way you divided sentences into separate stanzas, this was a nice touch. i also enjoyed the way that you used mostly lowercase letters, which added to the effect, and used '&' (i forget the name of it ^-^) instead of 'and.' very good job. you have a talent, please keep writing. i want to hear more from you. oh, just so you know, i added this to my favorites.-alison