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7/17/2004 c1 1JDWrites
But I like fags...lol, anyway, that is some major case of brainwashing I'd say. Wow, sounds like a girl I knew...
7/3/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
so scary dat its true but d idea 2 put d hatred and cruel opinions of many thru d eyes of a liitle innocent girl well it just shows how fucked up d world actually has bcum! iv said it b4 and ill say it again u r so incredibly talented! x
7/1/2004 c1 miss-peake
absolutely brilliant!
5/27/2004 c1 6venefican
Very good^^ im glad to be an atheist
4/13/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
Love the feeling it evokes. Sadness and the girl's hate. (Passed down like a family recipie.) Nice, nice, love the nursery rhymish feel.
4/5/2004 c1 40Funsmoke
Again, a piece that protests without lifting a finger. Beautiful, powerful, and shocking enough to piss the right-wingers off. I like the blatant honesty of it very much.
4/5/2004 c1 30g21lto
Oh, aren't little kids cute when they've been brainwashed by the Church? Heh. Oh, well. I was a brainwashed little kid. I grew out of it. Some do, some don't. I guess everyone is brainwashed until they realize they have to start thinking for themselves, then they might keep their beliefs because they find them good, or they might reject them. Wow, that was a long review. Anyway, I really like the poem. Gets your point across very nicely. I'm recommending this to a friend.
4/5/2004 c1 12Bleachedclouds
OMG! So many reviews *happy authoress dance*
I'm so glad you all liked it. Of course I'd be more glad if my poor little girl didn't realy exist all over the world... *le sigh*
4/5/2004 c1 13Kazmen M. Duncan
Very good. Deep too. That is really how ALL religions are.
4/5/2004 c1 PixieStix
I love thins poem, I think that it's quite true to most religons.
4/4/2004 c1 191mmoonsshiner
ha thats beautiful!
4/4/2004 c1 58Alyx Bradford
It's scary 'cause it's true. Nice work - sounds just like how a little kid would talk when regurgitating what she hears her elders go on about.
4/4/2004 c1 136Anat Qetesh
wow, very powerful. its amazing how true today that is. simply said, hugely meaningful.
4/3/2004 c1 22hopelessly.helplessly
nice. you did well at capturing an all-too-true phemomenon
4/3/2004 c1 Rika
Wow... It amazes me that someone who claims to know God would teach their child such evil stuff. If a parent is giving that messed up version of what God is like, then I'm very worried.I'm a Christian but often find myself having to see people like the little girl and it scares me because God does not tell us to believe those things. I really liked your poem. God bless.
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