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6/2/2004 c1 4kristinp
Wow...that's deep. I really hope you aren't feeling that, because that's a lot of emotion. I love your poem. It really makes me think and I like that about poetry. Keep it up and please write more. I'll be checking back :)
4/16/2004 c1 52Will Klemm
positive in the end. The spacing fascinates me (i'd prolly have to print it out to get the full effect). a little different from your previous work, in a good way, ur developing ur own style of writing and it looks great.
4/4/2004 c1 5A.R.B
So powerful and sad, but the last line is most powerful of all.
4/3/2004 c1 epics angel
I love the last line. This has so many layers to it that makes it so you. Thank you for being there for Aaron yesterday. It meant a lot to all of us here.

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