
6/2/2004 c1
4kristinp
Wow...that's deep. I really hope you aren't feeling that, because that's a lot of emotion. I love your poem. It really makes me think and I like that about poetry. Keep it up and please write more. I'll be checking back :)

Wow...that's deep. I really hope you aren't feeling that, because that's a lot of emotion. I love your poem. It really makes me think and I like that about poetry. Keep it up and please write more. I'll be checking back :)
4/16/2004 c1
52Will Klemm
positive in the end. The spacing fascinates me (i'd prolly have to print it out to get the full effect). a little different from your previous work, in a good way, ur developing ur own style of writing and it looks great.

positive in the end. The spacing fascinates me (i'd prolly have to print it out to get the full effect). a little different from your previous work, in a good way, ur developing ur own style of writing and it looks great.
4/3/2004 c1 epics angel
I love the last line. This has so many layers to it that makes it so you. Thank you for being there for Aaron yesterday. It meant a lot to all of us here.
I love the last line. This has so many layers to it that makes it so you. Thank you for being there for Aaron yesterday. It meant a lot to all of us here.