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9/21/2013 c1 64MethodlessMadness
sorry for lack of awesome review power...
1/11/2006 c1 50Kristina Suko
I like it!The imagery and all is nice!
9/11/2005 c1 23Lia Silverfrond
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Love it darling, love it.

6/21/2005 c1 2MageDay
Beautiful :)
6/12/2005 c1 86Soul Effrontery
Tis a wonderous poem of a wonderous creature, and I give much praise to the inconsistant rhythem, for it makes the progress ragged, just like the image described.
6/10/2005 c1 7Guinivere Sage
There are so many ways I could comment on this. The narrator is staring at these ashes, and though he knows the phoenix is supposed to rise, I can almost feel a bit of apprehension that she may not; that she will remain cold and lifeless. Hope is a big part of it too... very inspiring, if you think of it long enough. I like that it doesn't rhyme.

3/17/2005 c1 11Ethereal Silver
I liked the relation to a phoenix. Phoenixes are god...My favourite lines were 'Can cold ashes give new flame birth?Can fire stir my soul once more?' That was just...AH.
7/5/2004 c1 21Phoenix-Pen
I like this.
See, short!:)
And sincere, honest!:)
4/4/2004 c1 2sekome
An old myth that never is boring. Soon I will start my Legend, and the Phpenix is a large part of it. I say it's a pretty good Poem, reliving the fears a Phoenix may have while waiting to be summoned by the ashes once more.. Good job!
4/3/2004 c1 23OFKiken88
4/3/2004 c1 86The Fenix
Very nice work, anything with the Phoenix i tend to enjoy but this was very well wrote and put together thank you for the great read. : )
Hmm, this is pretty kewl, but it's a bit short, but other than that, it's a good poem, I liked it.

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