for Killing Me Slowly4/3/2004 c1 
2Miragaze
Loneliness can kill... x_x It was so beautiful, you are now one of my favorite authors. =)
2MiragazeLoneliness can kill... x_x It was so beautiful, you are now one of my favorite authors. =)
4/3/2004 c1 3Angerona
So i know we all do it, i do it and i might be being a little hypocritical but try and stray away from the used. Alot of the lines in this poem, althought they are your feels and are very raw and are very powerfull, are very used. AS far as our feelings go this was a great way to express them and i really felt them. As far a poetry goes try to exsperiment a little. great work.
-Angerona
3AngeronaSo i know we all do it, i do it and i might be being a little hypocritical but try and stray away from the used. Alot of the lines in this poem, althought they are your feels and are very raw and are very powerfull, are very used. AS far as our feelings go this was a great way to express them and i really felt them. As far a poetry goes try to exsperiment a little. great work.
-Angerona