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7/27/2007 c9 8squiggle-line

Paul. Matt. Paul. Matt. Ah, I can't decide! I like how you've written them both to be such nice guys that it's not immediately clear who Becca will end up with. The inital Paul-kiss seem a bit abrupt but I guess if they've been seeing each other at the diner for a couple weeks, than it makes sense. But in terms of the story pace, it seems a little off. Maybe emphasize these diner meetings and the change in time a little more?

This was a fun read. *off to look at more!*
5/14/2007 c9 Seremela
m.Paul..hehe. Update as soon as is humanly possible.
3/3/2007 c9 shattered.heart.baby
Hmm. So, I read "The Reality of Fairy Tales, which was AMAZING. But quite longer and I can see that you were more passionate about writing that one, especially since you finished it. Which brings me to berate you for not updating in two years ! You're killing me ! You can't leave these characters and ME at this point, at nine chapters ! It's unfair. So PLEASE update ! Try, at least. For your readers
5/14/2006 c9 helligonian
this is really good - keep going!
4/17/2006 c9 sakurachan101
luv the story... i know matt's a funny guy, and i really do like him, but i find becca and paul the better pairing... i mean, it's probably b/c they've just met/don't know eachother that well but i think they'd have a far healthier relationship...

NEways, the blabbering aside, i really enjoy reading ur story! update sometime soon!
3/23/2006 c1 6Sheets
Great so far! RL
5/24/2005 c9 MJ
This is getting interesting. I really want to know how they are going to react to each other when they meet again. Paul is not such a bad guy. I kind of hope he doesn't get hurt by Matt or something.Great chap. as always. PLZ update as soon as you can. P.S: No pressure!
5/21/2005 c9 rushed88
update sooner next time please. i'm looking forward to it.
2/27/2005 c9 2CynicInLove
missed the update a long long time ago. forgot to check for this story. oops. but u can't really blame me though. anyways, it seems like she's going to co ntinue her relationship with Paul. perhaps he'll be god for her for a while. or...longer. ah..depends. anyways, please update sooN!
2/27/2005 c9 7babydoll-007
i think i did a double take when i saw that this was updated, lol. you already know how much i love this story and how sad i am to know that even with a new (and great, by the way) chapter out, it is still on hold. oh well, c'est la vie, right? can't wait until you get the itch to pick this one up again...-laura
2/12/2005 c9 ReinaLucille
oh it's such a shame this story is on hiatus right now because i'm quite possibly addicted to it. i'm routing for mike all the way, even if i can't help but like paul. please update soon!
2/11/2005 c9 nedi
wonderful chapter. i hate it when someone as great as matt gets hurt like this... and it's worse that becca apparently has feelings for him that she won't admit.

2/10/2005 c9 1murky
To me, it seems pretty clear cut what she SHOULD do. (Matt of course. I mean, even if I don't like him much right now, it's obvious she's never really got over him.) Though I look at the title and start to worry. Let go? =\ Sounds like she's going to let go of Matt. I guess we'll just have to wait and see where this goes, huh!
2/10/2005 c1 murky
Hello! Yeah, I know updates are probably going to be few and far between, but doesn't matter =) I guess life never really turns out the way you want it too, huh. and now she's kind of stuck. I guess there's nothing wrong living life the way she is, it's just I would hope for something more. And yet, it isn't that she ain't smart enough to go (that's what I assume), it's just that she's stuck now! Hope things turn out for the better =\
2/10/2005 c9 4quotata
lol i thought this was on hold..
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