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4b
i like this ^^ it's nice, light and easy to read! plus you waited until you completed the entire thing to start posting, so i know there's an end to it ^_^
kudos for being such a great writer... and younger than i am x_X
-b.
4bi like this ^^ it's nice, light and easy to read! plus you waited until you completed the entire thing to start posting, so i know there's an end to it ^_^
kudos for being such a great writer... and younger than i am x_X
-b.
4/14/2004 c8 13Soulless Wanderer
Very, very good story. ^.^ I was reading this at school today on the laptop..so I didn't review earlier. Anyways, for some reason Rapier being the other dude didn't surprised me..I'm used to this type of unexpected storyline.
But I have to say, the idea is rather...unique and amusing. I really enjoyed some of the funny moments. I'm adding this to my fav..and update damn it!
13Soulless WandererVery, very good story. ^.^ I was reading this at school today on the laptop..so I didn't review earlier. Anyways, for some reason Rapier being the other dude didn't surprised me..I'm used to this type of unexpected storyline.
But I have to say, the idea is rather...unique and amusing. I really enjoyed some of the funny moments. I'm adding this to my fav..and update damn it!
4/14/2004 c8 8gossamerdragon
Oo another good chapter, I didn't realise there was too until after I reviewed! ^^' but yaya I got to find out a reason! ^_^!
8gossamerdragonOo another good chapter, I didn't realise there was too until after I reviewed! ^^' but yaya I got to find out a reason! ^_^!
4/14/2004 c7 gossamerdragon
Yay, I found out what happened and yay rapier is protecting her, how sweet! ^^ I really want to read the next chapter now! ^^
Yay, I found out what happened and yay rapier is protecting her, how sweet! ^^ I really want to read the next chapter now! ^^
4/14/2004 c8 91TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar
...OH GOD! THAT WAS SUCH A GOD STORY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ME LIKED IT! ME LOVED IT!... here's a free cookie for you for doing a GREAT JOB AT THIS... muhahahahahaha...BUT CONTINUE! CONTIUNE, DAMMIT!
91TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar...OH GOD! THAT WAS SUCH A GOD STORY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ME LIKED IT! ME LOVED IT!... here's a free cookie for you for doing a GREAT JOB AT THIS... muhahahahahaha...BUT CONTINUE! CONTIUNE, DAMMIT!
4/13/2004 c8 Xerro
Damn it that's evil of you just as well i was awake when the email came in about this chapter up, i hope the others review soon or i'm gonna screw. It's good to finally know what is so special about Tomorrow though. Oh and thanks for reviewing my story, i'll also go off and read Charon of the depths story as well now. I'd say update soon but there isn't any need too, the others will review soon... i hope.
Damn it that's evil of you just as well i was awake when the email came in about this chapter up, i hope the others review soon or i'm gonna screw. It's good to finally know what is so special about Tomorrow though. Oh and thanks for reviewing my story, i'll also go off and read Charon of the depths story as well now. I'd say update soon but there isn't any need too, the others will review soon... i hope.
4/13/2004 c7 14conclusivelead
Xerro - Baka means "idiot" or "moron" in Japanese. It's a very commonly used phrase. It's one of my favorite words. :P
14conclusiveleadXerro - Baka means "idiot" or "moron" in Japanese. It's a very commonly used phrase. It's one of my favorite words. :P
4/13/2004 c7 Xerro
Ok that explains why he was so quick to become a changed man, i kinda wish i had kept my mouth shut in my last review. I have one question though before i read your next chapter. What's a baka? I've heard that phrase so many times and i haven't a clue what it is.
Ok that explains why he was so quick to become a changed man, i kinda wish i had kept my mouth shut in my last review. I have one question though before i read your next chapter. What's a baka? I've heard that phrase so many times and i haven't a clue what it is.
4/11/2004 c6 8gossamerdragon
That was great chapter, I wanna find out what happens to her though! ^^ I can't wait for the seventh chapter! ^^
8gossamerdragonThat was great chapter, I wanna find out what happens to her though! ^^ I can't wait for the seventh chapter! ^^
4/11/2004 c6 3Charon-dragon
Wow... Li RaRoRu is a changed man, and so am I That was awesome!
I also read Tarot cards, and it is also cool! You have to continue them both!
I also downloaded a new chapter to my story!
You know you could change the name of the dojo to Tomorrow's Hotel! lol! lol!
'til next chapter, Charon
3Charon-dragonWow... Li RaRoRu is a changed man, and so am I That was awesome!
I also read Tarot cards, and it is also cool! You have to continue them both!
I also downloaded a new chapter to my story!
You know you could change the name of the dojo to Tomorrow's Hotel! lol! lol!
'til next chapter, Charon
4/10/2004 c6 Xerro
Tomorrow's brave allowing a murderer to stay in her house when she's just met him, seems to me though that Li changed his attitudes a bit to quickly, at least that's my opinion. Other than that it was a pretty good chapter. I'll go read your story Charon of the depth's at some point, not right away but i'll get around to it.
Tomorrow's brave allowing a murderer to stay in her house when she's just met him, seems to me though that Li changed his attitudes a bit to quickly, at least that's my opinion. Other than that it was a pretty good chapter. I'll go read your story Charon of the depth's at some point, not right away but i'll get around to it.
4/9/2004 c5 Xerro
This is so cool, i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter. I don't have any critiscms whatsoever just put up the next chapter soon, please.
This is so cool, i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter. I don't have any critiscms whatsoever just put up the next chapter soon, please.