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4/22/2004 c14 Becca
AGH! I LOVE! THE STORY!PLEAS IM BEGGING *puppy dog eyes* WRITE MORE AND POST IT...FAST! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE STORY TO DEATH! CHAPTER 14...I NEED MORE! MORE! U HEAR ME WOMAN MORE! :P PLEASE..? PERTY PERTY PERTY PERTY PLEASE...!
Thanks ^_^ ~~ Becca ~~
4/22/2004 c14 Xerro
I believe there is another reason for Tomorrow being so slow and that being she only ever knew her mother and father up until now so she isn't going to know much about love. Anyway a good chapter if a bit sappy but still they're usually the parts that make a story and you write them well. Update soon. Thanks BTW for reviewing Silver wolf gurls story.
4/22/2004 c14 11Never Knows Best
Oh yeah, I know what he means. *Grins like a maniac* Can't wait for the next chapter, really!
4/22/2004 c13 8gossamerdragon
O I wanna know what happens next! ^^ Thats so sweet of Rapier though! sort of confused how it got to that but oh well. i'm looking forward to the henxt chapter!
4/22/2004 c13 Xerro
My chapter 12 review was actually meant for chapter 13, i pressed the back button by accident, but still my point stands UPDATE SOON!
4/22/2004 c12 Xerro
Threats seem to be the way to go on this chapter according to your other reviewers so i see no reason to change that. Update now or i'll hunt you down and burn you in the night. That's after stealing your computer so i can read the rest of the story.
4/21/2004 c13 91TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar
continue, or ill eat you alive...
4/21/2004 c13 9Ms.Julia
oh my... PLZ UPDATE SOON! THAT WAS AN EVIL CLIFFY!
4/21/2004 c12 Ms.Julia
^_^ I'm reviewing! ^_^ I like it, do continue!
4/21/2004 c11 Ms.Julia
lol, aw! That's so KAWAII! ^_^ Rapier and Tomorrow sitting in a tree, K.I.S.S.I.N.G, first come love, then comes mariage, then comes the baby in the baby carriage ^_~ lol I luv your story do continue!
4/21/2004 c10 Ms.Julia
Naru seems like a brother figure ^_^
4/21/2004 c9 Ms.Julia
aw.. KAWAII!
4/21/2004 c8 Ms.Julia
oh my..
4/21/2004 c7 Ms.Julia
hm.. I wonder why they did..
4/21/2004 c6 Ms.Julia
very suspenceful!
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