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4/12/2004 c1 1Lauren K
Really good! one thing: too much repitition. Yes, some can be very good to keep the pattern going. But these words were repeated too much: gold/golden, pale, gentle (and probably more). but otherwise, I really loved it! Adding to favorites!
~Kiara
4/9/2004 c1 Twisted Sister Ed
^_^ I love it so much. It's brimming with magic and imagination. *sigh* Also nostalgia, in a way.
4/5/2004 c1 22Loki Mischeif-Maker
Wow. So much magic to this piece. It's discriptive, and very lyrical. I love it. Nine Elf-maidens. . . . very different but all ethereal. Very cool.

Cheers!
4/5/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. amazing descriptions and imagery and similies/metaphors
4/4/2004 c1 xzerinieah
Really nice, but I think the line
"Her silken cerulean dress of matching hue"
was out of rhythm.
The
"And wore a fitting crown
Her crown..."
part was a bit disillusioning, too.
Anyway, thanks for sharing this *magical* poem!

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