
4/6/2005 c1 luna neko
[Who is captive?
/Who is free?/]
*smiles*indeed... indeed...it reminded me of certain things...and it is amazing, really, quite amazing...it made me smile.
[Who is captive?
/Who is free?/]
*smiles*indeed... indeed...it reminded me of certain things...and it is amazing, really, quite amazing...it made me smile.
5/23/2004 c1
2M Welles
I love your style. The formatting goes just perfectly with the feeling of the poem and your words are just... It's amazing. ^^
xMegan

I love your style. The formatting goes just perfectly with the feeling of the poem and your words are just... It's amazing. ^^
xMegan
4/10/2004 c1
5redrussianscorpion
"And still find your remnants; the sea salts
Lingering in the very corners
And the cold air which blows through the hole
From which you escaped for the last time."
This stanza moves me, I can remember walking on Hunnington beach one night, after one of the "breaks" of a lover past, and stuffing my hands into my leather motorcycle jacket and finding sea salt, left over from some time ago, who knows when, and triggering such a memory. The pocket even has a hole!(still)
again with your use of the 'internal' italics/ parens-leads my mind to always wander in some direction with the flow.
I like this very much.

"And still find your remnants; the sea salts
Lingering in the very corners
And the cold air which blows through the hole
From which you escaped for the last time."
This stanza moves me, I can remember walking on Hunnington beach one night, after one of the "breaks" of a lover past, and stuffing my hands into my leather motorcycle jacket and finding sea salt, left over from some time ago, who knows when, and triggering such a memory. The pocket even has a hole!(still)
again with your use of the 'internal' italics/ parens-leads my mind to always wander in some direction with the flow.
I like this very much.
4/8/2004 c1
38Fate Thirteen
Did I not review this... *is puzzled*
Hm.
Beautiful. Constructive, I know, but true.
*sigh*

Did I not review this... *is puzzled*
Hm.
Beautiful. Constructive, I know, but true.
*sigh*
4/5/2004 c1
220Namir Swiftpaw
...beautiful words!
This is an exquisite piece of writing.
Please keep writing!
~Namir Swiftpaw

...beautiful words!
This is an exquisite piece of writing.
Please keep writing!
~Namir Swiftpaw