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8/10/2004 c22 passion101
aaw, it's over. I bet choosing which one she was going to end up with had to be hard. I probably would've had her choose no one and have to deal with the consequences of her actions. But, it was a good ending, i guess.
8/9/2004 c22 PhiloNysh
I did not expect that ending! I love when my expectations are defied. Great story (and you finished it!) well done!
8/7/2004 c22 108Kirona of the skies
That would have been a fantastically beautiful ending if it hadn't been for the fact that Jesse got her instead of Westley. And the bad thing is, I almost like him. Almost. ^_^;; This was a FANTASTIC story. You really, really, REALLY should consider publishing someday. I think you'd do great! I look forward to reading your next story! ^_^
-Kirona of the Skies ^_~
8/7/2004 c21 Kirona of the skies
NO! *hysterical sobs* But...but...NO! Fine, then I'LL take Westley! *snatches Westley and scurries off* ^_~
8/7/2004 c20 Kirona of the skies
GAH! THE SUSPENSE! I CAN'T TAKE IT! Good thing you added the next chapter along with this one. I might have had to kill you if you left me with just that. ^_^;; LoL j/k. This is SO AWESOME! *squee* ^_~
8/7/2004 c22 7Liriel87
How awesome! . . . i wonder what she will do. and does jesse has his fortune still? Im just going to asume things since the stories over lol. Good job! Good story!
Liriel
8/7/2004 c22 6tickledblue
ah well, now that i think about it, jesse and suzanna are more perfect for each other than westley and suzanna. i like westley better, but i guess they weren't "right" for each other. anyway, congratulations on a great story!
8/7/2004 c21 tickledblue
aw...she's not ending up with westley? oh well...next chap...
8/7/2004 c20 tickledblue
i KNEW this was going to happen! i would actually die if i saw myself in suzanna's position right now.
8/6/2004 c21 7lost in my box
aww poor Westly, I really liked him too.
8/6/2004 c21 7Liriel87
Is she going to run away as a catholic school girl? haha juust kidding. Jesse is going to hate her! Woot! he should. Upate soon!
Liriel
8/5/2004 c2 really-bad-egg
this is a cute story, i like it alot. Btw thanks for the review i truly appreciate it.
8/5/2004 c19 108Kirona of the skies
ARGH! That was THE hardest chapter to read. She is such a little PLAYER! XD Anyhoo, this keeps getting better and better. She'd better dump Jesse soon, tho, because if she hurts Westley I'm gonna be mad. ^_^;; But, of course, I have no say in the outcome. I'm just a reader. *sigh* Ah, fate is cruel. ^_~
8/5/2004 c19 7Liriel87
Well. . .she needs to work on her boy problems. it seems like she now really has one to many! Update soon!
Liriel
8/5/2004 c19 6tickledblue
ah...bad, bad suzanna. *shakes head* this is getting more complicated. and interesting. update soon!
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