for Pride Before a Fall7/23/2004 c16 passion101
Yes, wut a predicament she's in and it's all her fault too. Dealing with one man is hard enough, but 2? Oy, that is one difficult road to travel.
Yes, wut a predicament she's in and it's all her fault too. Dealing with one man is hard enough, but 2? Oy, that is one difficult road to travel.
7/22/2004 c16 
7Liriel87
Wow this is an awesome story. . .though dates, ages, and generally numbers are very off from eachother the plot is fantastic and i cant wait to see who she chooses. Im like her. . . i dont know who she should choose. Oh wouldnt it be funny if a third guy came in and struck her down with love but he didnt love her back. Well that would be depressing so no i guess not. Im liking jesse a whole lot right now cause he doesnt have so many freakin kids to take care of! Update soon!
Liriel
7Liriel87Wow this is an awesome story. . .though dates, ages, and generally numbers are very off from eachother the plot is fantastic and i cant wait to see who she chooses. Im like her. . . i dont know who she should choose. Oh wouldnt it be funny if a third guy came in and struck her down with love but he didnt love her back. Well that would be depressing so no i guess not. Im liking jesse a whole lot right now cause he doesnt have so many freakin kids to take care of! Update soon!
Liriel
7/21/2004 c15 abcdefgh12
Yay two more chapters! Fantastic job, I'm so happy Jesse isn't as shy anymore!
Yay two more chapters! Fantastic job, I'm so happy Jesse isn't as shy anymore!
7/21/2004 c15 passion101
yeah she better figure out wut the hell she's doing! I can tell who she's going to choose and it's not going to be westley. Although, I do have a question-how can westley court her if he's married? I know that his wife left him but r they officially divorced?
yeah she better figure out wut the hell she's doing! I can tell who she's going to choose and it's not going to be westley. Although, I do have a question-how can westley court her if he's married? I know that his wife left him but r they officially divorced?
7/19/2004 c13 1artistgirl727
This is such a good story! I love the characters and please, please update the story soon!
1artistgirl727This is such a good story! I love the characters and please, please update the story soon!
7/19/2004 c13 abcdefgh12
Yay fast update! Me need more. I'm glad to see that Susannah loves two men, lucky girl lucky girl. But love triangles are always complicated. Nice worky.
Yay fast update! Me need more. I'm glad to see that Susannah loves two men, lucky girl lucky girl. But love triangles are always complicated. Nice worky.
7/19/2004 c13 passion101
This story is awesome! Man, wut a situation she's gotten herself into! I feel really bad for her, but yet, I think she should go for westley. Jesse would be a good friend.
This story is awesome! Man, wut a situation she's gotten herself into! I feel really bad for her, but yet, I think she should go for westley. Jesse would be a good friend.
7/18/2004 c12 queenofthebuns7
Although this story was a little slow at first I like it. It kinda reminds me of... well... me. The country girl with no excitment in her life until one event changes that... anyway keep up the good work. By the way, where did the wild Jesse go? I liked him.
Although this story was a little slow at first I like it. It kinda reminds me of... well... me. The country girl with no excitment in her life until one event changes that... anyway keep up the good work. By the way, where did the wild Jesse go? I liked him.
7/18/2004 c12 7Damsel Under Stress
Hey, thanks for reviewing my stuff! It's the least I can do to return the favor.
Anyways, this is a FANTASTIC story! It's very tender and emotional, yet able to stand on its own, unlike many stories of its kind. Please keep up the marvelous work!
7Damsel Under StressHey, thanks for reviewing my stuff! It's the least I can do to return the favor.
Anyways, this is a FANTASTIC story! It's very tender and emotional, yet able to stand on its own, unlike many stories of its kind. Please keep up the marvelous work!
7/8/2004 c10 1Vincenza
What about Westley? Don't make her out to be a whore! Please don't! Write more soon!
1VincenzaWhat about Westley? Don't make her out to be a whore! Please don't! Write more soon!
7/4/2004 c10 108Kirona of the skies
Ooh, Suze's got all kinds of men throwing themselves at her. XD Lucky girl. LoL. I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story. Keep up the fantastic work! ^_~
108Kirona of the skiesOoh, Suze's got all kinds of men throwing themselves at her. XD Lucky girl. LoL. I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story. Keep up the fantastic work! ^_~
7/3/2004 c10 abcdefgh12
Yay finally the dance! Awesome job, Jesse sounds gorgeous...so much better than the doc.
Yay finally the dance! Awesome job, Jesse sounds gorgeous...so much better than the doc.