for Pride Before a Fall7/3/2004 c7 
108Kirona of the skies
^_^ Yay! I knew that would happen eventually. Still makes me feel all sappy, though. I'm such a sucker for romance. XD Very well written chapter. Write on, my friend! ^_~
108Kirona of the skies^_^ Yay! I knew that would happen eventually. Still makes me feel all sappy, though. I'm such a sucker for romance. XD Very well written chapter. Write on, my friend! ^_~
6/30/2004 c8 1Vincenza
You must write more soon. Um, the oldest daughter is 11. And Dr. Loren is around 21 so did he have the child at 10?
1VincenzaYou must write more soon. Um, the oldest daughter is 11. And Dr. Loren is around 21 so did he have the child at 10?
6/28/2004 c8 abcdefgh12
Sounds like a cool birthday party! I wish mine lasted that long. Awesome job on the writing and detail, you seem to have Susanna's voice down perfectly. Update soon!
Sounds like a cool birthday party! I wish mine lasted that long. Awesome job on the writing and detail, you seem to have Susanna's voice down perfectly. Update soon!
6/21/2004 c6 7lost in my box
I'm so happy you started another sory after Spinning Yarns. This is very good so far. I adore Rain, the way she just barges into other people's homes.
7lost in my boxI'm so happy you started another sory after Spinning Yarns. This is very good so far. I adore Rain, the way she just barges into other people's homes.
6/21/2004 c1 Chantilly Lace
Hey! You've reviewed my story so often, I decided to check out some of your work. ;)
I don't have time to read the whole thing right now, but I must say, I'm enjoying it so far. :D
You have a very nice writing style. Is first person difficult to write for you? I'm asking because it is for me sometimes. I'll edit a chapter and notice I've stuck in a "she walked up to him" or something like that, lol.
Hey! You've reviewed my story so often, I decided to check out some of your work. ;)
I don't have time to read the whole thing right now, but I must say, I'm enjoying it so far. :D
You have a very nice writing style. Is first person difficult to write for you? I'm asking because it is for me sometimes. I'll edit a chapter and notice I've stuck in a "she walked up to him" or something like that, lol.
6/17/2004 c5 108Kirona of the skies
o_O Wow. Rain was sort of...random. V. strange how you had her just barge in like that. Interesting...not sure if I like it or not. XD Me and my undeciding mind. Good chapter nevertheless! ^_~
108Kirona of the skieso_O Wow. Rain was sort of...random. V. strange how you had her just barge in like that. Interesting...not sure if I like it or not. XD Me and my undeciding mind. Good chapter nevertheless! ^_~
6/14/2004 c4 Kirona of the skies
Whaa? She pulled away? NO! *sobs* Oh well. I'll survive. I think. I'm sure there'll be a similar situation in the future of this story. ^_~
Whaa? She pulled away? NO! *sobs* Oh well. I'll survive. I think. I'm sure there'll be a similar situation in the future of this story. ^_~
6/11/2004 c4 abcdefgh12
Good job old friend! The kids are absolutely adorable, but I don't know about the dad...Update soon!
Good job old friend! The kids are absolutely adorable, but I don't know about the dad...Update soon!
6/10/2004 c3 Kirona of the skies
Aww! Poor Megan! =( Very interesting chapter. ContinuecontinueCONTINUE! ^_^
Aww! Poor Megan! =( Very interesting chapter. ContinuecontinueCONTINUE! ^_^
6/6/2004 c3 abcdefgh12
M, I have a feeling Mami's gonna want to set Susanna up with this doctor fellow. Good job on this chapter, update update update!
M, I have a feeling Mami's gonna want to set Susanna up with this doctor fellow. Good job on this chapter, update update update!
6/4/2004 c2 Kirona of the skies
Wow! What an interesting story! Hopefully I'll find time to read your other story, the one with 114 reviews. o_O Must be good. *makes mental note to self* But really, this one has got potential. Keep it up! ^_~
Wow! What an interesting story! Hopefully I'll find time to read your other story, the one with 114 reviews. o_O Must be good. *makes mental note to self* But really, this one has got potential. Keep it up! ^_~
6/4/2004 c1 abcdefgh12
Yay yay yay! Another story to quench my thirst...for stories. Uh yeah, I really love this so far. I can picture everything the descriptions are amazing. I like Susanna's perspective a lot. Update soon!
Yay yay yay! Another story to quench my thirst...for stories. Uh yeah, I really love this so far. I can picture everything the descriptions are amazing. I like Susanna's perspective a lot. Update soon!