
12/10/2004 c1
15Gremlins of the Mind
Very cool... that's all I can think to say. Oh, and wonderfully written.

Very cool... that's all I can think to say. Oh, and wonderfully written.
9/11/2004 c1
4pandagirl11
Good job! I always have a hard time incorporating pieces of poetry into a story but you did a great job. If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! =)

Good job! I always have a hard time incorporating pieces of poetry into a story but you did a great job. If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! =)
4/22/2004 c1
17Timberly Rey
Wow...this is sad. Is it about flourescnet lights going out, or somebody dying?
Oh, and you revied one of my chapters with something about bad people, and you put this: what good would a story be if everyone was good...
I'd have to say that it'd be very good. Might be boring, but the story itself would be very good. Pun intended

Wow...this is sad. Is it about flourescnet lights going out, or somebody dying?
Oh, and you revied one of my chapters with something about bad people, and you put this: what good would a story be if everyone was good...
I'd have to say that it'd be very good. Might be boring, but the story itself would be very good. Pun intended
4/7/2004 c1 Donna
this is awesome- really good! x
this is awesome- really good! x