4/14/2004 c1 Li'll Edgy
Little Edgey went to town a riding on a pony...
Yeah- y'all know that. I luffed your last part, but, 'Rin, I knew you posted TCAF, but this? WHY THIS! Not that I don't like it, mellon-nin, it just seemed so... odd... for you to post this. I just can't really reading it without thinking of the expression on your face as you wrote it. "WOE UNTO THEE!" Nyah. Yeah.
Anyhoot, it's time I started making sense (you knever know why might be reading.) Seeing as you posted this, you are now obligated to write a second one... only... last I checked, you didn't have any ideas... Time to poll the audience?
I'm still not making sense, am I? Wait... what's my Aardvark doing in your story? I said you could use him in the school play, but in this... tch, tch...
Still not making sense... wait... here's summat that should sound right: Great job.
WOOT WOOT... umm... bye.
Lil Edgy

4/8/2004 c1 7Llednyl
I really enjoyed this, I've always been a fan of this kind of offbeat humor. I grew up reading authors like Roald Dahl and Shel Silverstein, your style is almost reminiscent of them. I'll look forward to more of the falsehood chronicles.