for Immortal4/9/2004 c1 
61A.D Williams
I really like the way that the feeling of this poem is conveyed. Very Very powerful. *nods*
61A.D WilliamsI really like the way that the feeling of this poem is conveyed. Very Very powerful. *nods*
4/6/2004 c1 39t0mh4nk5
Your rhyming sounds so natural! I love it. "Open and bleeding for all to see / Locking in this cage I will never be free" I like that part, actually, I like all of it. Great job.
39t0mh4nk5Your rhyming sounds so natural! I love it. "Open and bleeding for all to see / Locking in this cage I will never be free" I like that part, actually, I like all of it. Great job.
4/6/2004 c1 Ayrith
Oh wow. I loved that. That was beautiful and touching. One of my more favorites.
Oh wow. I loved that. That was beautiful and touching. One of my more favorites.