for The Blackbird, the Crow12/30/2004 c1 
79Ivy Orion
(As I am a writer, being at a loss for words is kind of scary...) I like this poem. Its fun in a dark way (dont know if that came out right though...) Great job!
79Ivy Orion(As I am a writer, being at a loss for words is kind of scary...) I like this poem. Its fun in a dark way (dont know if that came out right though...) Great job!
12/13/2004 c1 53Lidless Eye
I liked this a lot. The short sentences and fragments added to the eerie effect. Good job.
~Lidless Eye
53Lidless EyeI liked this a lot. The short sentences and fragments added to the eerie effect. Good job.
~Lidless Eye
12/1/2004 c1 slimkitty
Whoa, this is my favorite of your poems! You totally capture the symbolism of crows and the color black. The last line is the best!
Whoa, this is my favorite of your poems! You totally capture the symbolism of crows and the color black. The last line is the best!
4/11/2004 c1 6Black and Silver Dreamer
Very dark, but a pleasure to read. I like how it doesn't follow a constant rhyming pattern. Makes it unpredictable and wonderful.
6Black and Silver DreamerVery dark, but a pleasure to read. I like how it doesn't follow a constant rhyming pattern. Makes it unpredictable and wonderful.
4/7/2004 c1 19Sytenir Antoralon
Very nice! The rhythm was fast, ne? Very enjoyable. The varying rhyme was interesting.
19Sytenir AntoralonVery nice! The rhythm was fast, ne? Very enjoyable. The varying rhyme was interesting.