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5/28/2005 c1 14redroplets
Again, well done... I've read all your works and like them all... your one hell of a writer~redroplets
5/1/2004 c1 29Katterree Fengari
very cliched, but I like the ending
4/8/2004 c1 13LeahBird
i love the truth that you have imbedded in it, as short as it is.
4/8/2004 c1 gothfreakvamp
ok, just a little bit of improvement needed. I suggest...try not to end it on "to question it" it leaves people hanging so that they might think that it needs more, try to end it like...well... "To see the real me"
other than that, great poem!

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