for Beneath The Water4/8/2004 c1 
5aiur
i really liked how you just took the whole drowning aspect and totally stretched it out across an entire poem. there's so much to say in this topic, isn't there? loved your repetition, and the whole idea of it was just nicely expressed and gave me this haunting kind of feeling. great job! can you do me a favour and check out something i've written?
~k8
5aiuri really liked how you just took the whole drowning aspect and totally stretched it out across an entire poem. there's so much to say in this topic, isn't there? loved your repetition, and the whole idea of it was just nicely expressed and gave me this haunting kind of feeling. great job! can you do me a favour and check out something i've written?
~k8
4/8/2004 c1 10trisket-n-gunther
wow that was really good, it was well written, i liked the ending, please review me back thanks!
10trisket-n-guntherwow that was really good, it was well written, i liked the ending, please review me back thanks!