for Finding Peace: Faith's Journey5/5/2004 c1 Milady
WHE! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS ONE! and i guess u kno y, but ANYway...
heehee
i think i helped u on this one...but it's last year, so i can't remember!
WHE! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS ONE! and i guess u kno y, but ANYway...
heehee
i think i helped u on this one...but it's last year, so i can't remember!
4/9/2004 c1 Josef Von Perriwinkle
Oh... it's so CHURCHY LIKE! XD
Cool!
How come my class never had to do something like this?
Oh... it's so CHURCHY LIKE! XD
Cool!
How come my class never had to do something like this?
4/9/2004 c1 
219Matthew James Current
Interesting poem. I respect poems like sonnets, but for our generation them seem to box us in a bit. They do force us to be creative to fill a square, but we're still filling a square. Don't be reluctant to just write free-verse. I think that you have a lot of talent yet to explore, of course I am just reviewing poems that you haven't had reviewed yet, because I like it when people review my work so I'm trying to go out and review a bunch of other peoples work so that maybe I could get a couple more people to see my work. ^_^ Take care now.
219Matthew James CurrentInteresting poem. I respect poems like sonnets, but for our generation them seem to box us in a bit. They do force us to be creative to fill a square, but we're still filling a square. Don't be reluctant to just write free-verse. I think that you have a lot of talent yet to explore, of course I am just reviewing poems that you haven't had reviewed yet, because I like it when people review my work so I'm trying to go out and review a bunch of other peoples work so that maybe I could get a couple more people to see my work. ^_^ Take care now.