for Misinterpreted Love2/14/2005 c2 
1You Make My Date
HEY! Firstly, wow I have quite a few comments to make, so sorry if I ramble. I always ramble. *slaps self* get on with it carmen! Anyway, this is an interesting story- the cliffy at the end was fantastic, and I'm glad. Cos Francis sounds a little 2 dimensional, so I would prefer it if you threw in another guy- a hot, cool spunk :) that would be awesome! I'm glad though that celeste isn't after guys for their appearance- your description of francis made me laugh. And speaking of laughing- this line, "It was low, quite low, and if everyone in the world were blind, they would’ve immediately assumed that a young man had just fallen into a pond." CRACKED me up. Because I've got a really low voice and my friends actually call me a man (great friends, eh?) so I thought it was hysterical! Glad to see that not all heroines in stories are high pitched blondes. ;) And on a random author's note- I saw in your profile that you're chinese and live in sydney! Score! teehee, I haven't found another syndey sider at all on fictionpress! I'm an aussie born chinese and live in sydney :) Oh- goong hai fat choy! (even though it's a bit late- happy chinese new year- in case you needed a translation of my crap chinese!) back to the story...A few pointers, I would really love a little bit more description as to what Celeste's surroundings are like- I didn't get that she was in medieval time until I saw your author's notes...and also, maybe think about doing a little less describing? Because I read a lot of paragraphs where she was rushing back and forth and it made my dizzy :) But this is a great story- again, FANTASTIC work on the cliffhanger- I loved it and can't wait to read more! Love, Carmen. P.S. Thanks SO much for your review of halloway legacy- I was absolutely stunned by how nice you were! cheers! please update soon!
1You Make My DateHEY! Firstly, wow I have quite a few comments to make, so sorry if I ramble. I always ramble. *slaps self* get on with it carmen! Anyway, this is an interesting story- the cliffy at the end was fantastic, and I'm glad. Cos Francis sounds a little 2 dimensional, so I would prefer it if you threw in another guy- a hot, cool spunk :) that would be awesome! I'm glad though that celeste isn't after guys for their appearance- your description of francis made me laugh. And speaking of laughing- this line, "It was low, quite low, and if everyone in the world were blind, they would’ve immediately assumed that a young man had just fallen into a pond." CRACKED me up. Because I've got a really low voice and my friends actually call me a man (great friends, eh?) so I thought it was hysterical! Glad to see that not all heroines in stories are high pitched blondes. ;) And on a random author's note- I saw in your profile that you're chinese and live in sydney! Score! teehee, I haven't found another syndey sider at all on fictionpress! I'm an aussie born chinese and live in sydney :) Oh- goong hai fat choy! (even though it's a bit late- happy chinese new year- in case you needed a translation of my crap chinese!) back to the story...A few pointers, I would really love a little bit more description as to what Celeste's surroundings are like- I didn't get that she was in medieval time until I saw your author's notes...and also, maybe think about doing a little less describing? Because I read a lot of paragraphs where she was rushing back and forth and it made my dizzy :) But this is a great story- again, FANTASTIC work on the cliffhanger- I loved it and can't wait to read more! Love, Carmen. P.S. Thanks SO much for your review of halloway legacy- I was absolutely stunned by how nice you were! cheers! please update soon!
1/11/2005 c2 3Sleeping Angel
Hey, what an excellent read! I'm loving it! William is such a sweetie!
Peace,
SleepingAngel
•·.·´¯`·.·•I await for you to wake me•·.·´¯`·.·•
3Sleeping AngelHey, what an excellent read! I'm loving it! William is such a sweetie!
Peace,
SleepingAngel
•·.·´¯`·.·•I await for you to wake me•·.·´¯`·.·•
12/30/2004 c2 53Individual-9086
This is a great start! You should keep going with this...really... great job.
53Individual-9086This is a great start! You should keep going with this...really... great job.
10/26/2004 c2 XxDragon Princess NikkixX
What's this? An updare without me knowing! Catastrophe! lol! Poor Celeste *shakes head* This was a great chapter, just like the last. Keep doing a great job! Love ya!
~Nikki~
What's this? An updare without me knowing! Catastrophe! lol! Poor Celeste *shakes head* This was a great chapter, just like the last. Keep doing a great job! Love ya!
~Nikki~
10/3/2004 c2 yOomin
HAHAHAH !
aw man ~
mai little lauraz finally riting ..^^
newaii ...veri * subtle * hint regarding ure um ...DEDICATION ~~
newai ..yeh parti hard ..nd yes * happi riting * ..** wOah ** dat soundz utterly gaii ..
newaii ...once agen ...partii hard :D
ps...btw um ...* veri original stori ^^ *
HAHAHAH !
aw man ~
mai little lauraz finally riting ..^^
newaii ...veri * subtle * hint regarding ure um ...DEDICATION ~~
newai ..yeh parti hard ..nd yes * happi riting * ..** wOah ** dat soundz utterly gaii ..
newaii ...once agen ...partii hard :D
ps...btw um ...* veri original stori ^^ *
10/3/2004 c2 3funky peaches
O_o...hahahahaha...
OMG! poor celeste...how positively embarrassing..haha...such a klutz...
I liked this chapter a lot more! isn't will such a cutie..haha...
francis = monkey! haha...good way to describe him..anyway...who were you talking about anyway with the screaming and no reflexes...i can't remember...
haha..anyway..its good good...! keep it up..i'm going to be a devoted reader now..:p
luv ya lots..*mwah*
nat..
3funky peachesO_o...hahahahaha...
OMG! poor celeste...how positively embarrassing..haha...such a klutz...
I liked this chapter a lot more! isn't will such a cutie..haha...
francis = monkey! haha...good way to describe him..anyway...who were you talking about anyway with the screaming and no reflexes...i can't remember...
haha..anyway..its good good...! keep it up..i'm going to be a devoted reader now..:p
luv ya lots..*mwah*
nat..
9/7/2004 c1 writtenreality
tres bien..
tres bien..
7/19/2004 c1 16kaika switched
Sounds good to me so far. I love Celeste, or what you have written of her so far. I hope you'll be adding more and getting a little in-depth on the characters. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedSounds good to me so far. I love Celeste, or what you have written of her so far. I hope you'll be adding more and getting a little in-depth on the characters. Keep writing!
6/24/2004 c1 the one and only. jeska
okay i finally reviewed, happy now? now hurry up and update.
okay i finally reviewed, happy now? now hurry up and update.
6/6/2004 c1 XxDragon Princess NikkixX
I really liked it! Your character was fun and interesting and she had such a unique voice and interesting perspective on things. It felt like the story was moving a little too rapidly and we didn't really get a great feel for all of the characters. I would suggest telling us a little about what your characters like and don't like, what they look like, what their goals are. . .things like that. Try to do it very subtly, something that they think of in an offhand way. It helps create a more well rounded character. I really, really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to an update!
Nikki
I really liked it! Your character was fun and interesting and she had such a unique voice and interesting perspective on things. It felt like the story was moving a little too rapidly and we didn't really get a great feel for all of the characters. I would suggest telling us a little about what your characters like and don't like, what they look like, what their goals are. . .things like that. Try to do it very subtly, something that they think of in an offhand way. It helps create a more well rounded character. I really, really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to an update!
Nikki
4/16/2004 c1 2Foodiholic
umm, i usually have to LIKE the main character or be able to connect to actually get in the story, but since it's set in a time i like coz of tp i'll keep readign if you keep writing!
keep it up RLkin!
RLkin1
2Foodiholicumm, i usually have to LIKE the main character or be able to connect to actually get in the story, but since it's set in a time i like coz of tp i'll keep readign if you keep writing!
keep it up RLkin!
RLkin1
4/14/2004 c1 me
vaguely amusing.
you need to establish the characters more.
overall good attempt. work on it a tad more
vaguely amusing.
you need to establish the characters more.
overall good attempt. work on it a tad more
4/9/2004 c1 3funky peaches
sweetie...
i love you and all..but what the hell were you thinking? I thought you weren't serious about this story?
but...my dear god...if it weren't for the fact that I actually know *whom* these characters were based upon...then i would've really enjoyed it...but heh...it's not bad hun...love it...just a little hmm...peeved maybe?
love it...despite where you got it from...keep it up...i shall read it...so update..k?
luv ya..mwah...
nat
3funky peachessweetie...
i love you and all..but what the hell were you thinking? I thought you weren't serious about this story?
but...my dear god...if it weren't for the fact that I actually know *whom* these characters were based upon...then i would've really enjoyed it...but heh...it's not bad hun...love it...just a little hmm...peeved maybe?
love it...despite where you got it from...keep it up...i shall read it...so update..k?
luv ya..mwah...
nat
4/9/2004 c1 ekyec
funni...funni...
just wait till nat sees...and a few other people too...
funni...funni...
just wait till nat sees...and a few other people too...