for On Earth My Little Mermaid9/8/2004 c13 Storytellergrl9191
Great! I've waited for this chapter, but as you're moving, I understand. But there is one thing I think you need to add...more action, just a bit more. Other then that, all I can tell you is that you've always had good soild chapters, and they've always left me wanting more. ^_^
Great! I've waited for this chapter, but as you're moving, I understand. But there is one thing I think you need to add...more action, just a bit more. Other then that, all I can tell you is that you've always had good soild chapters, and they've always left me wanting more. ^_^
9/8/2004 c13 
3No Wonder
*Falls off copmputer chair and rocks in fetal position * must...read...more! Oh WHY did you have to stop THERE? Good so far though! ^_^
3No Wonder*Falls off copmputer chair and rocks in fetal position * must...read...more! Oh WHY did you have to stop THERE? Good so far though! ^_^
9/8/2004 c13 Crystal Sky
YAY! I'm happy now...but see I can't just deal with a simple kiss I have to have more detail. It's an OCD thing...even though I don't HAVE OCD...Thats beside the point. Update soon!
YAY! I'm happy now...but see I can't just deal with a simple kiss I have to have more detail. It's an OCD thing...even though I don't HAVE OCD...Thats beside the point. Update soon!
8/31/2004 c12 8MoonlightSilverMadz
What can I say? Wonderfull,superb,awesome...the list goes on! Great twist in this one.I love it, and can't wait till you post the next chapter. Email me at if you change your title, okay? And I'm sorry to hear that you're going through friend problems.I know how that goes, but it'll get better, promise! Can't wait till next chapter.
8MoonlightSilverMadzWhat can I say? Wonderfull,superb,awesome...the list goes on! Great twist in this one.I love it, and can't wait till you post the next chapter. Email me at if you change your title, okay? And I'm sorry to hear that you're going through friend problems.I know how that goes, but it'll get better, promise! Can't wait till next chapter.
8/19/2004 c1 4BalineseCitty
That was a brilliant story! I am in utter glee from reading it. You have really great skill as a writer, please continue in this strain. You will have my support.
I lurved the chapter where Zack finds out. Is Sciella's name pronounced "Shella"? Just checking.
4BalineseCittyThat was a brilliant story! I am in utter glee from reading it. You have really great skill as a writer, please continue in this strain. You will have my support.
I lurved the chapter where Zack finds out. Is Sciella's name pronounced "Shella"? Just checking.
8/19/2004 c1 MermaidLover
Your story is so lovely! It is such fun reading it! Please write the next chapter soon, I am in great suspense and excitement. Also, thank you for your brilliant use of logic, the lack of which in some stories makes me go mad.
Your story is so lovely! It is such fun reading it! Please write the next chapter soon, I am in great suspense and excitement. Also, thank you for your brilliant use of logic, the lack of which in some stories makes me go mad.
8/19/2004 c12 fuckoff fictionpress wish to d
hi
cool update
Zack came of really scary in that chapter
im interested in finding out what happens next
so pls update soon
*smiles*
hi
cool update
Zack came of really scary in that chapter
im interested in finding out what happens next
so pls update soon
*smiles*
8/16/2004 c11 No Wonder
*Applaudes thunderously!* AMAZING! AMAZING AMAZING AS ALWAYS! Sorry it took me so long to review, my e-mail was on the fritz and I didn't get the author alert until just now!
*Applaudes thunderously!* AMAZING! AMAZING AMAZING AS ALWAYS! Sorry it took me so long to review, my e-mail was on the fritz and I didn't get the author alert until just now!
8/4/2004 c11 12ananomaly
:):):):) Glad that there is to be romance soon. Im a seasoned reviewer, dont you think i know that puppy dog eyes *always* work? Thats why i use them to the best of their ability. *puppy dog eyes* update soon!
12ananomaly:):):):) Glad that there is to be romance soon. Im a seasoned reviewer, dont you think i know that puppy dog eyes *always* work? Thats why i use them to the best of their ability. *puppy dog eyes* update soon!
8/4/2004 c11 1lillie chan
Poor Sciella is gonna be so heart broken when she finds out Peter is gay. Will Peter find someone romantically? I hope so! The plot line is unfolding very well! I can't wait to read more from you!
1lillie chanPoor Sciella is gonna be so heart broken when she finds out Peter is gay. Will Peter find someone romantically? I hope so! The plot line is unfolding very well! I can't wait to read more from you!
7/29/2004 c11 Storytellergrl9191
Oh this story just captivates me! If you were to write a prequal, I suggest that you watch this movie called "Splash" With Tom Hanks and Dayrl Hannah. It can give you some ideas maybe::Shrugs:: And I think there's a squel to that too..But I dunno. Anyways, check it out and keep going with this story; I can't wait to read more!
Oh this story just captivates me! If you were to write a prequal, I suggest that you watch this movie called "Splash" With Tom Hanks and Dayrl Hannah. It can give you some ideas maybe::Shrugs:: And I think there's a squel to that too..But I dunno. Anyways, check it out and keep going with this story; I can't wait to read more!
7/24/2004 c10 6Meitora
Very amusing. Sciella's character seems real and Zack's too. Is there going to be a greater plot, beyond cruise ship life? Aroo!
6MeitoraVery amusing. Sciella's character seems real and Zack's too. Is there going to be a greater plot, beyond cruise ship life? Aroo!
7/21/2004 c10 8MoonlightSilverMadz
Once again,you spin a entertaining and wonderful chapter! I love it;it's going to my favorites! Can I ask one question? Are you going to write a squel once this one is done? Because if you are,I will be overjoyed! I agree with lizziepadmegrl;you really should publish this! I'd buy it.^_^
8MoonlightSilverMadzOnce again,you spin a entertaining and wonderful chapter! I love it;it's going to my favorites! Can I ask one question? Are you going to write a squel once this one is done? Because if you are,I will be overjoyed! I agree with lizziepadmegrl;you really should publish this! I'd buy it.^_^