for On Earth My Little Mermaid7/21/2004 c10 
12ananomaly
New York was awesome, as was this chapter. :) Though i find this chapter riveting and i love it even through its tiny errors. Quick question. Im pretty sure sciella and zack are doing the whole romance thing, and i like the blossoming friendship . . . BUT I WANT ROMANCE DARN IT! lol. sorry for the outburst. i cant stand the suspense. soon, i need an update. *puppy dog eyes* hehe, they work every time, why not try them again? ^_^
12ananomalyNew York was awesome, as was this chapter. :) Though i find this chapter riveting and i love it even through its tiny errors. Quick question. Im pretty sure sciella and zack are doing the whole romance thing, and i like the blossoming friendship . . . BUT I WANT ROMANCE DARN IT! lol. sorry for the outburst. i cant stand the suspense. soon, i need an update. *puppy dog eyes* hehe, they work every time, why not try them again? ^_^
7/20/2004 c10 3No Wonder
W00T! I'll be the first to buy your book! :-) Yeahh! I've been waiting for an update, so glad you decided to post one! :-D
3No WonderW00T! I'll be the first to buy your book! :-) Yeahh! I've been waiting for an update, so glad you decided to post one! :-D
7/18/2004 c9 Storytellergrl9191
I've got one word for you: AWESOME! Your characters are so real to life.You provide great detail, and I love it when people do;other wise the story is just "blah".
I've got one word for you: AWESOME! Your characters are so real to life.You provide great detail, and I love it when people do;other wise the story is just "blah".
7/1/2004 c9 12ananomaly
Yet another brilliant chapter. Brother on the boat, *sigh* what a twisted plot you weave, lol! update soon! If you do before the 12 thought i wont read it. NEW YORK VACATION! whoo! Anyway, update soon! (the infamous and irresistable) *super cuddly puppy dog eyes*
12ananomalyYet another brilliant chapter. Brother on the boat, *sigh* what a twisted plot you weave, lol! update soon! If you do before the 12 thought i wont read it. NEW YORK VACATION! whoo! Anyway, update soon! (the infamous and irresistable) *super cuddly puppy dog eyes*
6/29/2004 c9 3No Wonder
W00T! GREAT as always! You have an awesome story here, and seriously, when you are finished I think you should you into publishing! I really do, this would be a great novel! Thanks for updating, no matter how long or short I "Thrill to every line." (Heehee, bet no one knows what song that comes from!)
3No WonderW00T! GREAT as always! You have an awesome story here, and seriously, when you are finished I think you should you into publishing! I really do, this would be a great novel! Thanks for updating, no matter how long or short I "Thrill to every line." (Heehee, bet no one knows what song that comes from!)
6/24/2004 c1 3Singing Sarah
Great first chapter. I'm definetly going to return and finish reading what you have so far. Very well written.
3Singing SarahGreat first chapter. I'm definetly going to return and finish reading what you have so far. Very well written.
6/23/2004 c8 Storytellergirl9191
I love your plot! It is SO good! Keep writting this story; I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (Oh,by the way,Lizziepadmegrl refered you to me)
I love your plot! It is SO good! Keep writting this story; I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (Oh,by the way,Lizziepadmegrl refered you to me)
6/23/2004 c8 3No Wonder
Awesome, awesome, awesome, as always! This concept is so cool, keep on writing! ^_^!
3No WonderAwesome, awesome, awesome, as always! This concept is so cool, keep on writing! ^_^!
6/23/2004 c2 Storytellergirl9191
I love your plot! It is SO good! I was refered to you by lizziepadmegrl,and she was right; your stories are great! keep writting please!
I love your plot! It is SO good! I was refered to you by lizziepadmegrl,and she was right; your stories are great! keep writting please!
6/23/2004 c8 emigo
This is good! I would like to see what happens. Are you going to end it soon or put in a few more events?
This is good! I would like to see what happens. Are you going to end it soon or put in a few more events?
6/23/2004 c8 Lola Sue
Hi! I am too lazy to sign in right now because im at a friends house, but what can you do. Yet another brilliant chapter and i am STILL waiting for more. STOP TEASING ME! LoL! I need more! LOL! update soon! *super adorable puppy dog eyes*
Hi! I am too lazy to sign in right now because im at a friends house, but what can you do. Yet another brilliant chapter and i am STILL waiting for more. STOP TEASING ME! LoL! I need more! LOL! update soon! *super adorable puppy dog eyes*
6/23/2004 c8 Cougar2k2
An interesting story so far. It will be intersting to see what might develope further along in the story, definatly a story I will be checking in on periodically for updates. Good Work!
An interesting story so far. It will be intersting to see what might develope further along in the story, definatly a story I will be checking in on periodically for updates. Good Work!
6/23/2004 c8 yvonne
not bad, do continue..
i wanna know what happens next =]
not bad, do continue..
i wanna know what happens next =]
6/21/2004 c7 12ananomaly
*eye twitches* Need More Story Now. ARGH! Stupid guy! ARGH! MORE STORY NOW (just so you know i love it) MORE NOW! *super cuddly and adorable irresistable puppy dog eyes*
12ananomaly*eye twitches* Need More Story Now. ARGH! Stupid guy! ARGH! MORE STORY NOW (just so you know i love it) MORE NOW! *super cuddly and adorable irresistable puppy dog eyes*
6/19/2004 c1 Rowena
To my concern I certainly think yuo should write another chapter..its interesting in some ways... i like it though..
To my concern I certainly think yuo should write another chapter..its interesting in some ways... i like it though..