
6/18/2004 c7
3No Wonder
SO GOD! Sorry I haven't been reveiwing, I've been really busy! You MUST continue though, I can't wait to see what happens!

SO GOD! Sorry I haven't been reveiwing, I've been really busy! You MUST continue though, I can't wait to see what happens!
6/14/2004 c6
12ananomaly
Thank you for the mention. UPDATE! I am desperately waiting to find out what happens! *irresistable puppy dog eyes*

Thank you for the mention. UPDATE! I am desperately waiting to find out what happens! *irresistable puppy dog eyes*
6/4/2004 c5 ananomaly
OH MY GOSH. I want more. NOW! I am absolutely entranced with your writing. I am and overenthusiastic reviewer, i know, but your writing is so wickedly cool!
OH MY GOSH. I want more. NOW! I am absolutely entranced with your writing. I am and overenthusiastic reviewer, i know, but your writing is so wickedly cool!
6/4/2004 c2 ananomaly
INTERESTED INTERESTED! Moving on to chapter three. I am in love with your flawless grammar and spelling! And the gorgeous plot youre hatching
INTERESTED INTERESTED! Moving on to chapter three. I am in love with your flawless grammar and spelling! And the gorgeous plot youre hatching
4/19/2004 c4
3No Wonder
Naw...it's not a hassle at all! I know how great it feels when someone reads every chapter and reviews them, and when I find a story that really intrigues (hows that spelled?) me, I review away! Lol...have a great time writing,
Jillian

Naw...it's not a hassle at all! I know how great it feels when someone reads every chapter and reviews them, and when I find a story that really intrigues (hows that spelled?) me, I review away! Lol...have a great time writing,
Jillian
4/14/2004 c3 No Wonder
Yes, this chapter is great! (You're on my author alert so I can read you chapters as soon as they come out!) That's ok, I understand. Itw as only confusing in the beginning maybe you could put something like *Zack's POV* at the top so readers would know who was thinking. ;-) Have a great day, I'm gonna go hit the pool!
Jillian
Yes, this chapter is great! (You're on my author alert so I can read you chapters as soon as they come out!) That's ok, I understand. Itw as only confusing in the beginning maybe you could put something like *Zack's POV* at the top so readers would know who was thinking. ;-) Have a great day, I'm gonna go hit the pool!
Jillian
4/12/2004 c2
2Abby42
Keep on going. Its shaping up to be really good, and I'm a sucker for shapeshifter- stories. And romances. *throws party that someone figured out what she liked* Only, can you do werewolves next? *puppy dog eyes*

Keep on going. Its shaping up to be really good, and I'm a sucker for shapeshifter- stories. And romances. *throws party that someone figured out what she liked* Only, can you do werewolves next? *puppy dog eyes*
4/11/2004 c2
3No Wonder
Heh, good! I was a little confused that the mermaid had gotten brainwashed or something into wanting to fish but then when the narrator said the mermaids were just fantaises I got it that the story was from Zack's point of view. Sounds great! PLEASE continue, I absolutly love mermaid stories! ;-)
Write on,
Jillian

Heh, good! I was a little confused that the mermaid had gotten brainwashed or something into wanting to fish but then when the narrator said the mermaids were just fantaises I got it that the story was from Zack's point of view. Sounds great! PLEASE continue, I absolutly love mermaid stories! ;-)
Write on,
Jillian