
4/18/2004 c1
28Jeremy Stone
I really liked this one, although im still very confused.
somehow though, i think thats the point. You arent supposed to know if she really has powers or not.
The girl still seems a bit odd, and the part about her asking the class for answers was sketchy IMO.
maybe im just stupid
still, good stuff

I really liked this one, although im still very confused.
somehow though, i think thats the point. You arent supposed to know if she really has powers or not.
The girl still seems a bit odd, and the part about her asking the class for answers was sketchy IMO.
maybe im just stupid
still, good stuff
4/17/2004 c1 Dan White
Oh. This is cool.
Don't let it get too confusing, though, in future chapters.
Oh. This is cool.
Don't let it get too confusing, though, in future chapters.