for Princes are Evil4/11/2017 c18 
5marzmez
You asked in a previous chap if yu should try to get this published. I say. Yes. It need some polishing- maybe tone down a few of the word repeats, add a little ore descriptive/observational passages and there you have it! A fun Y/A novel.
5marzmezYou asked in a previous chap if yu should try to get this published. I say. Yes. It need some polishing- maybe tone down a few of the word repeats, add a little ore descriptive/observational passages and there you have it! A fun Y/A novel.
4/11/2017 c1 marzmez
Remember how I said I was your newest fan? I love quirky characters. And your quirky character is one of the most lovable I have encountered yet. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
Remember how I said I was your newest fan? I love quirky characters. And your quirky character is one of the most lovable I have encountered yet. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
7/8/2015 c18 4Addie Lover of Stories
I really loved your story. And Rhian has convinced me,rabbits are evil and will take over the world! Hehe! Thank you for writing this, it was really fun to read.
4Addie Lover of StoriesI really loved your story. And Rhian has convinced me,rabbits are evil and will take over the world! Hehe! Thank you for writing this, it was really fun to read.
12/14/2014 c7 lea
All that and all I can think of is 'KC chicken!'
All that and all I can think of is 'KC chicken!'
12/14/2014 c5 lea
Oh my.
Oh my.
8/25/2014 c18 Guest
please tell me this is just a troll story...
please tell me this is just a troll story...
3/4/2014 c18 1Montara
The style of writing was so different for his point of view! His thoughts were so calm, so different from hers! May I say, not so all over the place like hers but not as sparkly, without life. Well, until he laughed. Than his thoughts started to have color. :) But I can understand him for keeping it a secret, Rhian was not ready.
Thanks for sharing Gavin's thoughts with us, I was curious to know what he was thinking and the exact moment he laughed.
1MontaraThe style of writing was so different for his point of view! His thoughts were so calm, so different from hers! May I say, not so all over the place like hers but not as sparkly, without life. Well, until he laughed. Than his thoughts started to have color. :) But I can understand him for keeping it a secret, Rhian was not ready.
Thanks for sharing Gavin's thoughts with us, I was curious to know what he was thinking and the exact moment he laughed.
3/4/2014 c17 Montara
So, Gavin stayed as Nolan for a little bit longer than necessary. She should be mad at him for that. But then, he should be mad at her for leaving him...Better that they've forgave each other :D
Training to be a queen...fun times ahead :D
So, Gavin stayed as Nolan for a little bit longer than necessary. She should be mad at him for that. But then, he should be mad at her for leaving him...Better that they've forgave each other :D
Training to be a queen...fun times ahead :D
3/2/2014 c14 Montara
They can be really mean with her, she just woke up from a coma and she's still in bandages...why put her through something like this and acting so rough with her?! This time I don't like Nolan...
They can be really mean with her, she just woke up from a coma and she's still in bandages...why put her through something like this and acting so rough with her?! This time I don't like Nolan...