for Princes are Evil3/18/2006 c18 
10cherrypiesizzle
Wow! Lol...that was a great story. Your writing greatly improved over the period of time you wrote this story. I liked it in Gavin's point of view better...not as random or crazy (like, with Rhian, it seems too much like a diary).
10cherrypiesizzleWow! Lol...that was a great story. Your writing greatly improved over the period of time you wrote this story. I liked it in Gavin's point of view better...not as random or crazy (like, with Rhian, it seems too much like a diary).
3/18/2006 c10 cherrypiesizzle
Umm...all this annoying 'Silence' stuff, and Rhian's childishness and selfishness is sorta getting to me. But I like the idea of the story, so I will keep on reading. You should think of editing this story though, it's a good idea, just clean the delivery of it a little bit. There's too much of Rhian's thoughts in it, too much like a diary.
Umm...all this annoying 'Silence' stuff, and Rhian's childishness and selfishness is sorta getting to me. But I like the idea of the story, so I will keep on reading. You should think of editing this story though, it's a good idea, just clean the delivery of it a little bit. There's too much of Rhian's thoughts in it, too much like a diary.
2/3/2006 c18 3Flights-of-Fancy
good hob. idea for a sequel title: 'when bunny rabbits attack' sorry, i just love that... lol
3Flights-of-Fancygood hob. idea for a sequel title: 'when bunny rabbits attack' sorry, i just love that... lol
2/3/2006 c17 Flights-of-Fancy
ok: the funniest parts were when rhian was trying to... er, not make the prince laugh. it got extremely annoying when she ran off, and when gavin pretended to be nolan still. the ending was too abrupt. it would have worked better if there was some heroic fight and he gained his memeory back at the very end. then you could add that little laugh about queen training. but you totally cut us off about lana, IT, and the creepy pedophile king. it wouldn't be as much fun in a sequel if you tried to pick up where you left off. i think you should write about their daughter and make her all serious and the complete opposite of her mom. watching her get together with someone similar to nolan's personlity would be funny. and bring back the rabbits! say something about the queen freaking out when som were found in the palace gardens or something... lol
ok: the funniest parts were when rhian was trying to... er, not make the prince laugh. it got extremely annoying when she ran off, and when gavin pretended to be nolan still. the ending was too abrupt. it would have worked better if there was some heroic fight and he gained his memeory back at the very end. then you could add that little laugh about queen training. but you totally cut us off about lana, IT, and the creepy pedophile king. it wouldn't be as much fun in a sequel if you tried to pick up where you left off. i think you should write about their daughter and make her all serious and the complete opposite of her mom. watching her get together with someone similar to nolan's personlity would be funny. and bring back the rabbits! say something about the queen freaking out when som were found in the palace gardens or something... lol
2/3/2006 c9 Flights-of-Fancy
this has got to be the funniest story i've ever read. although that girl is too stubborn for her own good. she's got to be the first one i've ever heard of to run (away) from her charming prince.
this has got to be the funniest story i've ever read. although that girl is too stubborn for her own good. she's got to be the first one i've ever heard of to run (away) from her charming prince.
8/26/2005 c12 2dancrchick
omg ! you got that snappy "oh man..." thing from dora the explorer! hahaha! and i didn't even notice it till the second time i read the story. the first time was 3 months ago. HOW COULD I NOT HAVE NOTICED! anyway nice sense of humor. its just the sort of thing i would do if i wrote stories... but i dont so i'll leave that to you!
2dancrchickomg ! you got that snappy "oh man..." thing from dora the explorer! hahaha! and i didn't even notice it till the second time i read the story. the first time was 3 months ago. HOW COULD I NOT HAVE NOTICED! anyway nice sense of humor. its just the sort of thing i would do if i wrote stories... but i dont so i'll leave that to you!
8/6/2005 c18 6Pigment of Your Imagination
Heh, how funny! You've got a great sense of humor! I know you've probably got the sequel started, but everyone loves another review!;p I've never heard a story involving..scary bunnies before! Hahaha!
6Pigment of Your ImaginationHeh, how funny! You've got a great sense of humor! I know you've probably got the sequel started, but everyone loves another review!;p I've never heard a story involving..scary bunnies before! Hahaha!
8/5/2005 c18 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
Yeah! That wrapped up things quite nicely, except...what happened to IT and Lana, the evil witch of the west? That's about it, though! GREAT STORY! It was hilarious! I almost fell out of the chair several times in the story! Hehehe. I'll have to read more from you!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
Yeah! That wrapped up things quite nicely, except...what happened to IT and Lana, the evil witch of the west? That's about it, though! GREAT STORY! It was hilarious! I almost fell out of the chair several times in the story! Hehehe. I'll have to read more from you!
Luv ya,Tashi :)