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8/8/2004 c18 2pinewarrior
wow!
great story!
8/3/2004 c18 1Icyglaze
I'm glad that you're one of the few authors who actually proofread their work. There weren't many grammatical errors, but the plot needs to be worked on. There really wasn't much of a plot if you take some time to read the story again. Nolan was completely useless as a character and kissing Nolan to prove that Rhian loved Gavin does not make sense at all. If she kissed Nolan, that would already imply she liked Nolan and not Gavin. So why would he change back to Gavin after that? Rhian as a character is quite annoying. Her witty remarks and endless chatter seemed a bit too much and cheesy. What I thought would be a humourous story did not make me laugh at all throughout the 17 chapters. Also, a couple of chapters around chapter 10 have the really long divider line that stretches the document and I had to copy and paste the story into a word processor so I wouldn't have to scroll horizontally every line to read it. Although the story was a bit annoying, somehow, I did not turn away from it. Keep up the good work! :)
7/30/2004 c18 6Yadot
If the rain forest has no rain than is it just a forest or does it become a jungle. Or do the bees really fly in the ocean or is that just the ants? Many questions have been unanswered in many people's mind.
7/24/2004 c18 ItalianQT
That was an excellent story! I'm gonna go read the sequel! I also enjoyed the the bonus chapter, it was well written! : )
7/19/2004 c18 5Dez Tiny
*cracking up* yes it DOES tie a few loose ends... *goes off to read the sequel*
-Ti
7/16/2004 c17 MimiGhost
FUNNY
LURVE DA FIC
7/16/2004 c1 MimiGhost
*lurrve da fic
7/14/2004 c18 Elizabeth
This story is too cute *grins widely*, if thats how youd want it to be described...have you by chance read another fic called THE COURTING OF AVIAHNNE RUBENNE by blazing-moon (something like that cant remember exactly)...im sure youd love it...
I love stories like this!
7/6/2004 c18 16Rednal29
Well, that was insightful. Funny, too. Especially how you were saying that Gavin would be the perfect student, if he actually cared about learning.
^_^ This has turned my day into a good one. Thanks!
7/6/2004 c18 1underage me
Whoaa dude °spaces out for a while, and out of the corner of somewhere someone pokes her on the head with a humongous candy cane°, uh, what, what-happened?, OH my bad I have a little fever (my brain: little fever? who are you kidding, you racked the hell out of me trying to read that story, 4 hours. FOUR HOURS trying to read that story sheesh, why cant you do as your mother says and go to be-). °bangs forhead on the computer screen° OWW! Sorry about that oh yeah really cool cant wait for the sequel dude, email, le cherry, when you put up the 1st. chappie or if you already have it up my bad then Ill just have to look for it well, really cool of you to make a POV on Gavin's side of it.
Once again you did fairly well on this mission and I salute you, giddy up cowboy.
Rebellious Cherry a.k.a. KyLe
7/6/2004 c1 2Lamenting Fox
I was going to write one of those "I spent my entire Saturday reading your story, I hope you're happy" reviews... but then I realized it's only 1:40 and it's a Tuesday. Darn.
I don't think I've read many stories written like this, it was awesome.
Though I can't help but wonder what the people downstairs are thinking when they hear these sporadic (and probably half-hysterical) bursts of laughter emanating from my room...
7/6/2004 c18 Kara Adar
! YAY! THAT WAS SO COOL! I KNEW THERE WAS A REASON I CHECKED THIS STORY! HURRAH! WUPPERIHO! LOL! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! I'LL CHECK OUT ROYAL PREDICAMENT LATER, RIGHT NOW I HAVE TO EAT LUNCH SO I CAN GO TO ART CLASS! ~Kara
7/6/2004 c1 tinaton aka blat
Really cool. You people crack me up! it's really very entertaining reading 'stick-in-the mud' about the prince dude too. What a unique outlook, thinking about princes as sticks-in-the-mud... You're cool!
7/5/2004 c18 5aiur
lol i just say CUTE! i don't care if it was really really fluffy. it was still so cute! *squeals* ... i loved it so, so, so much, haha. beautiful; something in gavin's POV! i always said he was a sweetie, hehe. awesome job =)
~k8
7/5/2004 c18 49Endowment's Seraph
haha. that was great. well I'm off the read the next chapter in royal Predicament.
~Mel
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