
5/26/2004 c13
2The Light of Earendil
Fav character- Rhian:) She's silly and crazy and has strange thoughts... she's a lot of fun to hear about! Great job!

Fav character- Rhian:) She's silly and crazy and has strange thoughts... she's a lot of fun to hear about! Great job!
5/26/2004 c12 The Light of Earendil
Yay a dragon! I love the concept that dragons steal people so they won't be lonely:) Great job, keep up the good work.
Yay a dragon! I love the concept that dragons steal people so they won't be lonely:) Great job, keep up the good work.
5/25/2004 c13 brokensilverheart
hey that was great. keep writing. my favorite character is rhian cuz she is kinda like me. crazy yet funny.
ami
hey that was great. keep writing. my favorite character is rhian cuz she is kinda like me. crazy yet funny.
ami
5/24/2004 c12
1DaVinci's Reincarnate
Oh, and did you know, strawberry flavored popcorn is the best! lol.. ok, i'm weird..

Oh, and did you know, strawberry flavored popcorn is the best! lol.. ok, i'm weird..
5/24/2004 c13 DaVinci's Reincarnate
My favorite character is Ahanu! and btw.. did you know that is the best name? Oh, and also Rhian.. she's pretty cool. Don't forget Gavin and Nolan.. uh oh... i'm naming them all! i dunno, i guess i can't pick just one. OH well..
My favorite character is Ahanu! and btw.. did you know that is the best name? Oh, and also Rhian.. she's pretty cool. Don't forget Gavin and Nolan.. uh oh... i'm naming them all! i dunno, i guess i can't pick just one. OH well..
5/24/2004 c13
4l. fayette
Hey! I LOVE SHISH KABOB! poor alligators, no kabob for them…My fave character? I'd say the evil princess girl. why? cuz she's evil *muhahahaahha* (i stole a coke from the fridge, there's a good reason my mom keeps tabs on how much caffeine I consume!

Hey! I LOVE SHISH KABOB! poor alligators, no kabob for them…My fave character? I'd say the evil princess girl. why? cuz she's evil *muhahahaahha* (i stole a coke from the fridge, there's a good reason my mom keeps tabs on how much caffeine I consume!
5/24/2004 c13 lady scribe of avandell
brad. brad is the greatest...hehe. him and demon. i don't know why...because i like dragons and evil horse-fairies and achilles. ok. that works. anyways, good couple of chapters! can't wait for more! i hate algebra II. just thought i'd mention that. yeesh, this was random. sere mi eru...lady scribe of avandell
brad. brad is the greatest...hehe. him and demon. i don't know why...because i like dragons and evil horse-fairies and achilles. ok. that works. anyways, good couple of chapters! can't wait for more! i hate algebra II. just thought i'd mention that. yeesh, this was random. sere mi eru...lady scribe of avandell
5/24/2004 c13
49Endowment's Seraph
yeah, you could get it published. hmm, I think my favorite character would be... Rhain. or however her name is spelled. Because she's awesome! and I understand her thinking process, which might not be so great. lol. write more soon
~Mel

yeah, you could get it published. hmm, I think my favorite character would be... Rhain. or however her name is spelled. Because she's awesome! and I understand her thinking process, which might not be so great. lol. write more soon
~Mel
5/24/2004 c13 emigo
Very good. It's very refreshing, without the complicated plots that everything else seems to really like. You are a very good author. You have a great voice. My favorite character... hmm, well, it's hard, Rhian probably because she's the one telling the story, and we see everything through her eyes. I also liked Gavin and Leah. Gavin sounds like this guy that I used to like, and Leah's cool. Keep it up, you're doing great!
-Haddie
Very good. It's very refreshing, without the complicated plots that everything else seems to really like. You are a very good author. You have a great voice. My favorite character... hmm, well, it's hard, Rhian probably because she's the one telling the story, and we see everything through her eyes. I also liked Gavin and Leah. Gavin sounds like this guy that I used to like, and Leah's cool. Keep it up, you're doing great!
-Haddie
5/24/2004 c13 ming
TWO chappies? Yay! you don't know how much I needed that laughter after an exam. And I haven't even got to the major ones yet. This story plus others are my lifelines to sanity at the moment, so if you don't want me to go freaking crazy ( not in a fearing rabbits way), UPDATE! *grins* oh, and your mum's right, by the way, you should so try to get this published. It'd be like a fantasy version of the Princess Diaries, except with a much better heroine. I don't know who my fav character is, i love all of 'em. next chappie soon please!
TWO chappies? Yay! you don't know how much I needed that laughter after an exam. And I haven't even got to the major ones yet. This story plus others are my lifelines to sanity at the moment, so if you don't want me to go freaking crazy ( not in a fearing rabbits way), UPDATE! *grins* oh, and your mum's right, by the way, you should so try to get this published. It'd be like a fantasy version of the Princess Diaries, except with a much better heroine. I don't know who my fav character is, i love all of 'em. next chappie soon please!