for Princes are Evil5/1/2004 c7 brokensilverheart
hey its me again and i just absolutely love your story1 It is funy and romantic. Oh I don't what you are up to but it better be very good. Ami
hey its me again and i just absolutely love your story1 It is funy and romantic. Oh I don't what you are up to but it better be very good. Ami
5/1/2004 c5 brokensilverheart
omg...this chapter is so funny. But It I don't like him at all. He seems so arrogant and pompous. But the way you talk about Prince Gavin you make him seem so fine! BUT THEN AGAIN NO BOY IN THIS UNIVERSE IS LIKE HIM. well hope u get more reviews. Ami
omg...this chapter is so funny. But It I don't like him at all. He seems so arrogant and pompous. But the way you talk about Prince Gavin you make him seem so fine! BUT THEN AGAIN NO BOY IN THIS UNIVERSE IS LIKE HIM. well hope u get more reviews. Ami
5/1/2004 c8 Amby
What can i say, i love it. Keep it up, i really can't wait to see what comes next. You know what would be funny though, if Rhian gets a curse on her that Gavin has to break, but that is just me.
Good job
What can i say, i love it. Keep it up, i really can't wait to see what comes next. You know what would be funny though, if Rhian gets a curse on her that Gavin has to break, but that is just me.
Good job
5/1/2004 c8 neverwassure
Yes, that chapter was hilarious. I loved the encounter with the sorceror, and later with Demon turning into Gavin's fairy godfather.
The fangs are freaky, though. I mean, someone having fangs everytime they want you do to something that you are protesting against?
Well, I reviewed almost every chapter, and now this is the last one, so I have to end with an update soon!
Yes, that chapter was hilarious. I loved the encounter with the sorceror, and later with Demon turning into Gavin's fairy godfather.
The fangs are freaky, though. I mean, someone having fangs everytime they want you do to something that you are protesting against?
Well, I reviewed almost every chapter, and now this is the last one, so I have to end with an update soon!
5/1/2004 c2 brokensilverheart
Hey, I thought nothing would make me laugh today, but it seems your story is soo funny. I broke out laughing soo mant times durin gthe chapters.You know romance and humor. Keep writing.
Hey, I thought nothing would make me laugh today, but it seems your story is soo funny. I broke out laughing soo mant times durin gthe chapters.You know romance and humor. Keep writing.
5/1/2004 c6 neverwassure
Wait... I don't get it. Why is she crying by the end?
I liked Demon, though, although demons are generally thought of as evil who does harm over just being troublesome.
Although they can be troublesome, too.
Wait... I don't get it. Why is she crying by the end?
I liked Demon, though, although demons are generally thought of as evil who does harm over just being troublesome.
Although they can be troublesome, too.
5/1/2004 c3 neverwassure
I liked the maid. Although I was a little confused about King Conner. Crazy?
I liked the maid. Although I was a little confused about King Conner. Crazy?
5/1/2004 c2 neverwassure
I loved Sir Bob. This girl makes me laugh, even if she doesn't make Prince Gavin, and her million names for him laugh.
I loved Sir Bob. This girl makes me laugh, even if she doesn't make Prince Gavin, and her million names for him laugh.
5/1/2004 c1 neverwassure
Hey, this is pretty funny.
*leaves short review and dives into the next chapter*
Hey, this is pretty funny.
*leaves short review and dives into the next chapter*
5/1/2004 c1 
2The Light of Earendil
This is by far the best story I have read on fictionpress or fanfiction! You are a fabulous writer and I'm so happy I found your story. Great language:) Have you ever read Ella Enchanted? This story reminds me of that book, which is one of my favorites(I haven't seen the movie yet and I hope it didn't mess it up-oh well). I'm planning on writing my own lighthearted fairy tale so stay tuned. Thanks for entertaining me- keep up the amazing work!
~Light
2The Light of EarendilThis is by far the best story I have read on fictionpress or fanfiction! You are a fabulous writer and I'm so happy I found your story. Great language:) Have you ever read Ella Enchanted? This story reminds me of that book, which is one of my favorites(I haven't seen the movie yet and I hope it didn't mess it up-oh well). I'm planning on writing my own lighthearted fairy tale so stay tuned. Thanks for entertaining me- keep up the amazing work!
~Light
5/1/2004 c8 Topaz-Tribal
_ You're dead, Martes! This was a bad time to leave me at a cliffhanger!
_ You're dead, Martes! This was a bad time to leave me at a cliffhanger!
5/1/2004 c8 49Endowment's Seraph
lol. this is great, man I'd be freaking out if I saw something like that, I'd be like, "whoa, I knew there were three universes!" i accidently put that on a test, damn science teacher. anyway. you've got to write more soon! I love when you do the two chapter deally, I should try that, ha! like that'd happen.
~Mel
49Endowment's Seraphlol. this is great, man I'd be freaking out if I saw something like that, I'd be like, "whoa, I knew there were three universes!" i accidently put that on a test, damn science teacher. anyway. you've got to write more soon! I love when you do the two chapter deally, I should try that, ha! like that'd happen.
~Mel
4/30/2004 c6 Kara Adar
Gail Carson Levine fan, are we? good! me too! *makes a disgusted face* have you seen Ella Enchanted yet? really cool story, by the way! can't wait for the next chappter!
ps~ yes, if you don't write the next chappter soon, we WILL want to kill you!
Kara
Gail Carson Levine fan, are we? good! me too! *makes a disgusted face* have you seen Ella Enchanted yet? really cool story, by the way! can't wait for the next chappter!
ps~ yes, if you don't write the next chappter soon, we WILL want to kill you!
Kara
4/29/2004 c6 10My Works 87
Man! She's really upset about him laughing. HE didn't behave like he was terribly in love with her or anything. But I suppose he is...we'll just have to see *evil laugh* great story. It's cute!
10My Works 87Man! She's really upset about him laughing. HE didn't behave like he was terribly in love with her or anything. But I suppose he is...we'll just have to see *evil laugh* great story. It's cute!